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Sifright
02-02-2013, 05:37 AM
The halls echo
A single hollow sound
Sadness abounds
Rivers of emotion
The quick flow of time
All fades to nothing
Awareness departs
The horizon blackens
Extinction awaits
Revising Ocelot
02-02-2013, 08:58 AM
It's blue down here. Stop living in the wrong parts of the country.
Flarecobra
02-02-2013, 11:19 AM
70 degrees and sunny. I dunno what you're getting at.
Sifright
02-02-2013, 11:33 AM
no understanding
humanity races to
a calamity
Geminex
02-02-2013, 11:51 AM
Hey, cheer up, Sifright!
We might get another shot,
in a million years.
Sifright
02-02-2013, 12:35 PM
Tempus fugit, cadens
mundo est mori, maestus
Vita mala est.
Sithdarth
02-02-2013, 12:56 PM
Man you're so unoriginal (http://www.nuklearforums.com/showthread.php?p=238127#post238127) you make the U.S. look down right imaginative.:dance:
On the bright side, I guess France is looking to do something about their light pollution and make shops and stuff go dark when closed? That's nice, and I hope other countries follow.
I mean, it's probably too late to matter, but it's a little comforting to see some countries kinda trying.
Locke cole
02-02-2013, 01:02 PM
Haiku are simple
But sometimes they don't make sense
This isn't a haiku at all.
Sifright
02-02-2013, 01:27 PM
On the bright side, I guess France is looking to do something about their light pollution and make shops and stuff go dark when closed? That's nice, and I hope other countries follow.
I mean, it's probably too late to matter, but it's a little comforting to see some countries kinda trying.
The arctic melts
The air is heating quickly
destruction comes
No time remains
our course is immutable
so the end is nigh
Revising Ocelot
02-02-2013, 01:39 PM
By the way, haikus are incredibly overused on the internet and thus they are ruined forever, therefore this thread is bad.
This is before my inherent bias against Sifright comes into play, mind.
Sifright
02-02-2013, 01:44 PM
By the way, haikus are incredibly overused on the internet and thus they are ruined forever, therefore this thread is bad.
This is before my inherent bias against Sifright comes into play, mind.
some day soon I will
play borderlands two with
you, but not now
an edit this way
comes for true love I do
hold for you ocelot
the pain of typing
many haiku together
hurts my heart
Revising Ocelot
02-02-2013, 01:52 PM
some day soon I will
play borderlands two with
you, but not now
an edit this way
comes for true love I do
hold for you ocelot
Borderlands? No
I just really hate counting
Syllables. Screw you!
Sifright
02-02-2013, 02:17 PM
Man you're so unoriginal (http://www.nuklearforums.com/showthread.php?p=238127#post238127) you make the U.S. look down right imaginative.:dance:
I came not for your
applause my compatriot
but your empathy
for a great sadness
pervades, heart body and soul
ignorance is bliss
A Zarkin' Frood
02-02-2013, 03:07 PM
Penis cock dick schlong
Bagpipe flute didgeridoo
A series of tubes
Sifright
02-02-2013, 03:42 PM
Penis cock dick schlong
Bagpipe flute didgeridoo
A series of tubes
thread of angst
A disparaging message
A hateful wanker
A Zarkin' Frood
02-02-2013, 04:04 PM
Now mastication
Seven big poles to polish
hateful, sexily.
The Artist Formerly Known as Hawk
02-02-2013, 07:01 PM
Zarkin you are crap
Your haikus don't make much sense
And you should feel bad
A Zarkin' Frood
02-02-2013, 07:17 PM
Pride overwhelming
Utter haiku perfection
with penis jokes
Sifright
02-02-2013, 07:23 PM
A maudlin thread
Sad hateful users abound
Stop the Hatred please
The pursuit of cash
A blue world globally warming
Needs no further flames
Revising Ocelot
02-02-2013, 07:32 PM
http://i.imgur.com/TjIalPg.png
Gruntilda says that your haikus stink.
Try some rhyming couplets instead, she thinks!
Sifright
02-02-2013, 07:39 PM
Hmm, an interesting concept this does seem.
To find words that rhyme might be hard I would deem!
So as I continue along this poetry attempt
Allow me to express the depths of my contempt.
For you see what we call the human race.
is destroying our world at a tremendous pace.
Inspite of the knowledge our greatest minds sing
ever more CO2 to the atmosphere we bring.
Our oceans rise and not a word in the media is spoken
our hearts and souls cry out but all is broken.
in the end it would appear that we are doomed.
but who cares when there is more that must be consumed.
Locke cole
02-02-2013, 08:38 PM
From all these poems, I would surmise
You want to win some sort of prize.
But despite the haikus
that you skillfully use
In the thread title, you misspelled "skies"
Sifright
02-02-2013, 08:39 PM
From all these poems, I would surmise
You want to win some sort of prize.
But despite the haikus
that you skillfully use
In the thread title, you misspelled "skies"
:crying:
Locke cole
02-02-2013, 08:45 PM
Whether or not the crying is fake,
there's no need for any heartache.
for though I could scoff
"your meter is off!"
I get the point you're trying to make.
Sifright
02-02-2013, 08:48 PM
Whether or not the crying is fake,
there's no need for any heartache.
for though I could scoff
"your meter is off!"
I get the point you're trying to make.
For soothe what is this meter you mention?
My poems have no need of such a convention.
The words I bring forth to you all
speak for themselves no matter how they fall.
Though my skills in poetry are quite poor
and whilst my prose lacks much grandeur
This attempt at communication I am sure
that you all must sadly endure
is an outlet for me to explain and constrain
the things that bring to me, much pain
a last edit before I head to the bed by my wall
today is my first day attempting poetry, good bye all.
Magus
02-02-2013, 09:19 PM
I guess the skies were grey today but it was dropping a nice beautiful fluffy snow here. You know, the nice kind, not the crappy kind.
Japan
02-05-2013, 04:15 PM
Light flickers through leaves, shattering old hearts for new in brilliant autumn.
(This is an American sentence, which is a thing that is mostly a haiku but also a lot of Ginsberg. Its worth a google.)
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