haha, he's a glue man, I like it. though remove a technique or two and save them for abit later in the story krog

Okay! Will do!

Thanks phil, that makes sense! Rugnar's Body Produces Glue!

Yeah, no, see, It's explicitly the power to make HIMSELF as light as a feather. I always liked that One Peice takes presumably sucky powers and shows how they can be awesome. So "Wire-fu" without the "Fu" will be the word of the day.
Edit: Though that DOES give me ideas.
Anyway, posting it here, and editing it into the main profile:

Personality: Dorian is very flashy in his ways, generally recquiring an audience for any major undertakings, he is also big on "proving himself" because of that, he gets in quite a bit of trouble. While he doesn't go around looking for it, he does view more things as "trouble" than your average person. Any thing viewed as a slight will be immediately seized upon, and if a heartfelt and sincere apology isn't convincingly given, then GOD help you.

Dorian makes his money primarily through the plundering of people who have the grave misfortune of irking him, and treasure hunting. He's also very "Hands-on" in his leadership, running head first into any challenges he is faced with alongside his men.

Techniques:

Flying Feather: Activating his devil-fruit power, he levitates off the ground, points his pistol in one direction, fires, and goes flying off at top speed in the opposite direction.

Flying Feather Flail
Attaching his grapple hook to the handle of his cutlass, he swings the blade around him in a wide arc, hovering off the ground, the faster he does it, the more air he gets.

Feather Flip Getting a running start, he flips into the air, making himself light just as he does, then instantly becoming normal just as he lands on his target. He clears a great distance during the jump.

Prem, Krog, both looking good, approved

menarker after giving it alot of thought I decided to disallow your sword being sea prism stone, being able to completely negate devil fruit based defences is too much for a starting character.

well was hoping Mauve would come on so I could see if she wanted to make any changes, but guess it would be rather minor, so I'll start working on the RP itself and have it up soon.

and, up

I'm here, I might make a few minor changes in a few hours, but nothing major. I'm at work right now.

I suppose I can get that sword as an upgrade or so later.

Anyhow...

You sure you meant that? Grammer-wise, that statement means that the Red-Band Pirates are NOT rough and NOT ready to tussle with anything through at them.

I think you might have meant "we're nothing if not rough and ready to tussle... blah blah blah."

your arguing about grammer... with a pirate?

... I guess that is a silly notion. But I rather we look competent in the eyes of the NPCS and foes instead of being laughed at because the leader accidently describe his crew members as scaredy cats.

This is the world of One Piece.

If This guy can be a captain, or this guy, then a little grammar won't hurt us too much.

Now if he runs in combat when that's my job? Then we have problems. ;)

If given permission you can go ahead and say he let out the brain melting screech of doom, no need to wait for me to type it out.