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Wherein I rip off MSPaint Adventures
I haven't really been doing anything creative for a fair bit of time. Would there be interest in an MSPaint Adventures style thing going on here, where commands are posted, and the story progresses via submitted commands?
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I would support this!
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They're usually fun to read if nothing else. I'm game.
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Sure why not
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Sure. Been a while since we've had one of those here.
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I would not be opposed to it.
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Alright, cool! I'll be pretty much trying to update it as often and quickly as I can, and I have a general idea for at least a beginning. First post will be up soon.
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Alright then. The rest shall be vastly superior to this one, just needed to do SOMETHING to get it started off.
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-Don a monocle. Obviously, destiny requires me to be dressed in the finest fashions.
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-Retreve arms from desk.
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Get ye flask
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>Find family.
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==> Observe surroundings
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Reunite with loving wife and daughter!
Ok, in all seriousness, -Appraise surroundings for items of use and value.- |
>Resolve to spend more than five minutes per page, and draw things in a manner more aesthetically pleasing. Just, like, next page or something.
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-Disco dance.
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> Reach through mirror and grab the other pillow.
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-Consider leads on scoops to follow.
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Three at once! I reserve the right to use commands out of order, if nothing has happened that drastically changes the state of things.
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-Consider teleportation methods. Then just walk.
By the way, thanks, I now have something to save to look at when I need a laugh. :P |
-Call a taxi. A dapper gentleman like myself can't possibly be seen WALKING amongst the common folk.
Alternately: -Remember that I'm a broke, poor reporter and walk anyway. |
Sell that pocketwatch to the first pawn shop you happen to pass on the way to work.
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I feel the need to apologize for going so long without updating. :P I've been feeling under the weather all day, and pretty much passed out around 3:00. I'm feeling better now, so I'll try to crank one or three out soon.
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Challenge the other gentleman to fisticuffs. Winner takes all!
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>Devour everything.
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I had a completely different direction originally planned for this page, but then fisticuffs.
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Offer the other gentleman a proposition. He may avoid Fisticuffs if he goes to work for you while you find new scoops.
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As a heads up, I will be probably switching up how the characters are portrayed every other comic until I find a way that I actually like that can be done quickly.
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ENGAGE FISTICUFFS DUE TO HIS INSUBORDINATION
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Turn around to see if you also have a paper on your desk and, if so, examine what secrets it contains.
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Absolutely no reason that this took so long.
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Consider the looking glass' ease of transportability.
EDIT-come on people I don't wanna be the only one making commands. Who all said they'd actively contribute again? |
Pack up and head to work already. You will deal with the SSERP scum later.
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Head to work, flipping off the guy in the mirror as you go. He seems like a jerk anyway.
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Get another mirror and show it to the man in the mirror
OR Ask the man in the mirror for a mirror OR Get a camera, and a TV Put the TV in front of the mirror Hook the camera to the TV Point the camera to the mirror Turn both devices on ??? Profit |
That's the spirit! More suggestion givers!
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>Tell the story of your journey to work.
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Make up some crap involving Aliens, Elvis, and the Teletubbies.
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Tell them you're going out to check on them
Pawn gold plated watch FIND THE SCOOP OF THE CENTURY! |
-Evade boss' question with witty insults!
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Command suggestions are directly proportional to update frequencies.
So, thirteen pages in: Anything that needs fixing/work/should be changed immediately? Feel free to rip into it, as well as giving story commands, and I'll take all suggestions into mind. I mean, ultimately, this entire thing is about what people who aren't me want. |
Examine notes on Bakery or Fakery
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So, I guess the interest for this has waned by page 13? I mean, I'll keep doing it anyone wants, since I've got nothing better to do.
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This seems mostly like a time for "==>"
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Oh, crap, I totally forgot that I could do that. XD
The whole, "Get input" thing distracted me. You will see more ==>ing, in the future. |
I -was- interested but you ignored all of my suggestions so!
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Well, FINE, I'll do less ignoring of your suggestions in the future. Mainly, I was going with a majority rules sort of thing, but from here on out, I'm going to go with whoever's suggestion I like.
Also: A new universe to trash is now yours. Edit: Also, turns out that you get busy at the worst possible times, all the time. I make no promises of speedy updates, in hopes that I shall remain less busy from here on out. |
> Mirror. Other guy's pillow. Make it happen.
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> Get down to business.
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-Examine surroundings.
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That plan totally worked! Promising that I might not have spare time clearly leads to increased spare time!
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>Eat your hat. DO NOT QUESTION THE LOGIC BEHIND THIS ACTION.
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Recover sensibilities> mourn crumpled hat> Exit door.
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> Be the other guy.
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>Begin a
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I have nothing really to say. Here's some more pages.
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Give "Mrs. Grayer" a suspicious leer!
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> Chide UMM for inappropriate attire (his lack of hat). Then have him investigate Mrs. Grayer.
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>Point out his lower status of being one of the hatless.
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Going for quantity of updates over quality, here.
Edit: Makeing indeed. I will leave it, as a mark of shame. |
>Begin musical duel to the death as gentleman's code 143 dictates.
>Draw your rubber chicken for said duel. |
==>?
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And, finally, I have some more spare time.
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>Burst through the left door like Kraimer.
Or... >Think of a REALLY good banana pudding recipie. |
> Peek through the middle door.
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>swap the signs over the doors
>wait for a innocent bystander to open either door >??? >profit! |
>Open the door with the symbol, then run giggling into the room with the eye slot.
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Hey, let's start doing this in a smart way, which is both faster, and not a bunch of sketchy lines.
No, this update really didn't accomplish that much. Feel free to yell suggestions to change aesthetics. |
> Bust in like Kraimer, then run back out and down the stairwell.
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> Ask the eyes for a Password if they want to be let into the "bakery"
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Would anyone be too torn up if I killed this off for awhile? Now that I say this, I'll probably end up updating in a day or two, of course. Mainly, I've got other things that I am doing that amuse me more right now, over at the Kool Ruz, as seen below.
I still don't know what that means. |
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