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the place to post a comic?
i wanted to post a comic i'm making to test it out and see how it's received, and i was wondering if this were the right place.
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I would put it in Books and Comics, but here might be fine as well.
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here it is, i call it moonshine.
http://myaka.freeyellow.com/moonshine/001.jpg i do the scripts and my friend sentia does the art. we've got 3 in total finished and scanned, the other two are here. 002 003 |
It seems a bit rushed to me. I'd recommend setting things up over a few more comics -- like the guy's name, background, stuff like that. Y'know, exposition.
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well, if you think about it, how much exposition was there before black mage blew up the giant? not much, or how much exposition before piro and largo hopped on a plane and flew to tokyo, still a lot of holes in that one. i figure there's plenty of time for exposition and exposition related jokes down the line. possibly involving emu's. or potatoes.
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Blowing up the giant wasn't central to the plot. If the whole guardian thing is just a quick gag and not the whole point of the series, you're fine; otherwise, you need exposition. Remember how much Brian had before the 8-Bit Survivor episodes, which were central to the plot?
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well, i've got stuff planned out, almost the first 30 written, and it's quickly followed by why guardianship is important.
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I think it's pretty good. I've seen comics start out with less and still make it big. Good name, good art, good scriptwork, yeah, it seems good.
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loooooooooooooooks gooooooooooooooood, you should check out [static]. I'm trying to get the word out on this comic, no one really knows about it.
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One thing that might help is if you didn't hijack other folks threads to spam a link, don't you agree?
Back on Topic: The comics are funny and well drawn. It made me think of Harvest Moon for a bit... Even though I've never played it. <_< 8/10 (Would probably be higher if there were more comics to read about it). |
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