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ElfLad 08-21-2005 07:10 PM

Generic Quest
 
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v488/Obi2/comic.png

A little one-shot sprite comic I made. I feel like continuing it now, though.

Admiral_Kelly 08-21-2005 07:18 PM

That's funny! So, everyone first goes to Quest High and study both magic and fighting yet everyone is assigned a class and a quest to graduate.

Nicely done.

gurusloth 08-22-2005 02:19 AM

Well, even I must admit that it wasn't horrible. Waiting to see the next few before a final verdict is rendered.

Meister 08-22-2005 04:02 AM

Very good! It's put together well, consistently funny, and I wouldn't mind seeing more. :)

Skyshot 08-22-2005 07:55 PM

I found it funny. My main recommendation, if you plan to continue it, is to update your sprites beyond basic recolors. Also, the two panels showing towards-facing views of the grads in the chairs kinda bug me. You probably would have done well to keep the view of the side-view panels.

Besides that, you might want to do three panels a row rather than two. I give you a before and after.

Favorite line: "Bartholomew fight good." And I look forward to team-related antics a la Naruto.

Also, do those two dwarves have Thief hair? The horror. :)

Fenris 08-22-2005 08:03 PM

That should be continued. It is very humorous, and I think you set it up nicely for a sequel.

Somehow, even before I clicked the link, I KNEW my comic would be the example.

Thanks, Skyshot. :) Jackass. =P

ElfLad 08-27-2005 11:53 AM

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v488/Obi2/comic2.png

Thanks for the feedback, everybody.

gurusloth 08-27-2005 01:14 PM

Second episode = teh funny. Keep it up, this is actually good stuff!

Admiral_Kelly 08-27-2005 04:20 PM

Worthy of 8-bit Theater!

Sky Warrior Bob 08-28-2005 08:32 AM

Didn't care much for the first comic, the second was however far better. You really could do with cleaning up your sprites. In addition, make sure you've got at least all of the regular FF3j poses for your main characters.

Feel free to check out this thread for good spriting examples:
http://www.nuklearforums.com/showthread.php?t=328

Of course, while this is a good comic & all, I am somewhat disappointed. When I jumped into this thread, I really was expecting a sprite comic that used sprites from the old Space Quest, Police Quest, and King's Quest games.

SWK


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