| Chairon |
10-13-2005 07:04 AM |
Oh, I see what you did there Mr. Clevinger
Nuklear Age.
Page 111
3/4 or so of the page down.
It reads "Argh!" Atomik Lad screamed as he dove across Nuklear Man's lap and yanked the wheel back and forth to keep the mortality rate where it had been before their outing.
I have altered the next paragraph to show what was really going to happen, but someone changed it at the last minute.
"Sparky! What're you doing, trying to kill us?" Before Nuklear Man had a chance to push Atomik Lad back in his seat, one of those fancy flying cars crushed the roof above Atomik Lad, pinning him with his head in Nuke's lap.
See where it's headed? No? Well I better write some more. MWAHAHAHA!
The fear was amazing. Atomik Lad had never felt anything like this before. Sure, he and Nuke would have survived, but what about all the mortals? Hundreds would have died. His heart was pumping now, adreneline surgeing, and it all went to the one place guarenteed to get you in more trouble then dancing naked on the freeway.
I believe I've made my point.
Oh, by the way...
Could I get a copy of that?
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