So, did Red Wing fly up in the sky with FanDingo biting through his leg, but then FanDingo let go and is now falling towards the ground?

FanDingo likes to talk and he doesn't plan ahead.

so yes.

Okay, two questions:

Is Premonitions really allowed to begin to murder the entire investigation storyline I've got going?

Second, is there any way we can tell him to fix his grammer and stuff, because (no offence intended) I know nine year olds who can make stuff that's easier to read.

Okay, two answers:

No, premonitions can't 'murder' the storyline your investigation because its my storyline and I say it happened differently then that.

Secondly it's kinda hard to not take offense to being called a lesser to a nine year old, but I can suggest that Premonitions talking to Rhiya about her soon to be open RP School. That could be helpful.

Premonitions: Change Arkham to Gotham State prison and the problems are pretty much solved. When I approved your villain rival you didn't need to backtrack him a chapter to explain why he's here, new chars can jump in anywhere, thats what makes the batman world great. But as I mentioned to Darth up there Rhiya Ravenwing will be starting a school of rping with instruction ranging from absolute beginner to repolishing a master roleplayers skill.

I think it would really help you because from reading your posts I see that you have the idea in your head, its just that you're just having problems expressing it. But if you don't want to thats fine as well, its not a pre-requisite for the rp.

Well that time I was rushed, The public library computers only give you thirty minutes and I was at my last five when I started that so.. much apologies I couldn't get out yesterday. But now you can all groan in annoyance. As I have returned!
edit:How would I murder it any way? I'm asking Mime what happened, not making any assumptions. I don't get pissed of easily, (well actually I do but it's fun to lie to yourself ) so go ahead. In fact if you want to say anything else to or about me feel free. And I'm not being snippy or anything, I'm completely serious

The reason he said you were murdering his storyline was because he was following the assumption that it was an employee who worked at arkham who sneakily released many prisoners to cover over the fact he was getting to the villain he wanted.

While in your post it explains the massive breakout as a side-effect of the deluded getting to mastermind, which causes his investigation to go from espionage to searching for the deluded. So you in essence killed his storyline to make room for yours. So thank you for changing your post as to allow room for the two storylines to exist simultaneously.

And on an unrelated note I'd start updating again if Cheshire would just post again. So go pester him. Pester I say. PESTER, PESTER, PESTER!!!

Actually I was saying that the deluded were released in whatever happened and one went to get him. In my post I stated that they were already there and one went for him. I stated that something happened. I was trying to be vague so I would'nt interfer with what happened. Sorry if there was any confusion.

I think I included everyones story that I could. But if you feel left out let me know.

Funnily enough, that's what the police usually say in these kinds of situations.

The police should handle that freak. I'm assuming you've already figured out what he is but if you haven't it will be spoiled here: A meta-human with the ability to cover over his form and mind onto the bodies of others, a la agent smith. I was originally going to have him duplicate but this seemed more unnessecary, so I went with it. His eye splits open like a snakes jaw, and strikes the person with its retina cord neck bleeding all over the floor all the while. I don't really have a name for him but each person he creates has an alternate persona, its subtle but its there. They all have OCD though.

Anywho, I've got lots of fun brewing around the city and next chapter everything will start coming together.

And remember kiddo's if you dropped out you can pretty much reappear anytime because much like batman, characters can reappear mid-storyline because they just ran into whatever carnage was going on. Also I'm still accepting sign-ups, just cause.