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Nique 08-14-2006 04:32 AM

Gauging public reaction
 
I am hesitant to do this, but I'm afriad that if I don't, I really will give up on web-comicing completly...

Basically, I just want to get a reaction from you guys about the comic below. I'll answer questions about it to the best of my ability (creative process, story etc), but Im really interested in what YOU think about it. The idea is basically a fresh start of Highschool Starship with an exciting intro, and brand new everything. New graphics, charecters, and story.

The problem is, though, that we haven't really talked about it in weeks, maybe months, and I'm not sure if we should keep trying or what. I don't have the energy to do art AND writing, but neither of us seem to be able to get anything ...hmmm... SOLID accomplished when we confer on this project.

Anyway, have at it. It may be the only time you'll see it online in anycase.

Here

EDIT: Ok, I'm not sure why photobucket resized the image - It should be about twice that big. Gah. Well, I'll see if I can fiddle with it later on, but it really is getting late, so I'ma hit the sack and try to fix it tommorrow.

EDIT 2: Ok, it might work now.

Nikose Tyris 08-14-2006 07:05 AM

I like it. Maybe if you didn't have the big white spaces, it would look better; other than that, It's awesome. The joke is funny, the look is clean... the only thing that I don't get is the name right now. I'm agonna go dig into your older comics now, to see how big of a difference it is.

good comic though. Keep them up.

[Edit] read some of them; this is a BIG improvement. I like this one way more, and the humor is better. Keep it up!

Seran 08-14-2006 09:14 AM

Photobucket can't take images that are too large in size.

But I like the comic. Keep going, you'll soon get more popularity and/or notice for your comic!

Fifthfiend 08-14-2006 09:32 AM

Hella prettier than the ff6 sprites had been.

The actual spaceship could use some work though.

Also, I'm not sure how he's not getting sucked out into the cold void of space right there.

Mesden 08-14-2006 10:05 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by fifthfiend
Also, I'm not sure how he's not getting sucked out into the cold void of space right there.

Comedic effect.

ElfLad 08-14-2006 11:00 AM

I like it. It's a funny joke, and the art is well-done.

Fifthfiend 08-14-2006 11:09 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Mesden
Comedic effect.

You're a comedic effect!

Mesden 08-14-2006 11:37 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by fifthfiend
You're a comedic effect!

Your face is a comedic effect!

greed 08-14-2006 11:42 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by fifthfiend
You're a comedic effect!

*Opens envelope*Things fifthfiend can say without getting a spam warning now that he's a mod.

Ontopic, I agree with getting rid of the white lines, that will make it a lot cleaner looking. Other than that, the humour is good and the visuals are both easy on the eyes and distinct.

Edit: Woe is me for I art ninjarred.

And Mes continues the grand tradition of being Mesden.

Mesden 08-14-2006 11:47 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by greed
And Mes continues the grand tradition of being Mesden.

Oh, I've had it up to HERE with you.

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See that?

^Up to THERE.

Anyhow, yeah, it is a funny comic, what with the comedic effect (Screw you, Fifth!) and, aside from the obvious white lines and sizing, it's looks good.

Not some crappy 8-bit Knock Off, I'll say.


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