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mmorpc 11-23-2006 06:00 AM

MMORPC - Webcomic
 
Hello everyone, i've been a reader for a while and have read the forums for some time but never really posted. I figured I'd give my strip a plug and get some crits from readers of the same genre.

I have it at Drunk Duck for the time being.
http://www.drunkduck.com/MMORPC/index.php?p=114481
(strip 1)

Only 3 strips so far but I only update once weekly atm so thats like 3 weeks in.

What you guys think?

Adghar 11-23-2006 12:25 PM

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Originally Posted by mmorpc
Hello everyone, i've been a reader for a while and have read the forums for some time but never really posted. I figured I'd give my strip a plug and get some crits from readers of the same genre.

Either you're lying or someone has plagiarized someone else. No, I'm not counting time warps, that's silly.
I distinctly remember seeing your first strip posted on these forums before, and I remember some other people giving critique on it.

mmorpc 11-23-2006 07:22 PM

If it was posted, it wasn't me.

I only have 4 posts, 2 in this thread, 1 for account activation, and 1 in general about exercise.

gurusloth 11-24-2006 02:50 AM

It's good, now make more. I DEMAND IT!

Iyeru 11-24-2006 10:47 AM

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Originally Posted by mmorpc
If it was posted, it wasn't me.

I only have 4 posts, 2 in this thread, 1 for account activation, and 1 in general about exercise.

I believe he was saying that someone ELSE had posted your comic before. It looks good, but I'm not giving anymore comments on it until the top of this is revealed.

Meister 11-24-2006 11:10 AM

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Originally Posted by iyeru42
I believe he was saying that someone ELSE had posted your comic before. It looks good, but I'm not giving anymore comments on it until the top of this is revealed.

Let's not blow this up to a big issue, because, well, it isn't.

The comic's nice enough, but it lacks a premise. I can just about gather that it's set in an MMORPG environment (truth be told, if it weren't for the title I'd have had a much harder time, too) but not more. Who's the protagonist? What setting is it exactly - a specific game or "real life as an MMORPG?" If you don't want to let the reader know more at this point, okay, but I find it very off-putting.

mmorpc 11-24-2006 11:30 AM

Na its my strip, i have the pdf's to back it up.

Im working the strip into a story. Right now they are all newbies to things like kill rats will be epic battles to them.

There are a few things that are going to happen in the strip before the group gets a specific quest though. Along the lines of character development and story setup.

Also, he might have seen my strip over at OOTs forums under the user name Encicra. I noticed his location says "OotS forums"

Iyeru 11-24-2006 07:59 PM

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Originally Posted by mmorpc
Na its my strip, i have the pdf's to back it up.

Im working the strip into a story. Right now they are all newbies to things like kill rats will be epic battles to them.

There are a few things that are going to happen in the strip before the group gets a specific quest though. Along the lines of character development and story setup.

Also, he might have seen my strip over at OOTs forums under the user name Encicra. I noticed his location says "OotS forums"

Why would you use PDFs to make a comic?

maj225 11-24-2006 10:00 PM

not my kind of comic

mmorpc 11-24-2006 10:04 PM

Lol, I was typing fast. I meant psd's.


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