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MMORPC - Webcomic
Hello everyone, i've been a reader for a while and have read the forums for some time but never really posted. I figured I'd give my strip a plug and get some crits from readers of the same genre.
I have it at Drunk Duck for the time being. http://www.drunkduck.com/MMORPC/index.php?p=114481 (strip 1) Only 3 strips so far but I only update once weekly atm so thats like 3 weeks in. What you guys think? |
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I distinctly remember seeing your first strip posted on these forums before, and I remember some other people giving critique on it. |
If it was posted, it wasn't me.
I only have 4 posts, 2 in this thread, 1 for account activation, and 1 in general about exercise. |
It's good, now make more. I DEMAND IT!
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The comic's nice enough, but it lacks a premise. I can just about gather that it's set in an MMORPG environment (truth be told, if it weren't for the title I'd have had a much harder time, too) but not more. Who's the protagonist? What setting is it exactly - a specific game or "real life as an MMORPG?" If you don't want to let the reader know more at this point, okay, but I find it very off-putting. |
Na its my strip, i have the pdf's to back it up.
Im working the strip into a story. Right now they are all newbies to things like kill rats will be epic battles to them. There are a few things that are going to happen in the strip before the group gets a specific quest though. Along the lines of character development and story setup. Also, he might have seen my strip over at OOTs forums under the user name Encicra. I noticed his location says "OotS forums" |
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not my kind of comic
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Lol, I was typing fast. I meant psd's.
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