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Evil Duck and the Quest for the Taco
This is a webcomic about a Duck that has a sudden urdge for a taco, Meets people, and goes on an adventure!
All the series can be found here :) Better read it from the beggining, and tell me what you think :D |
Well, it wasn't really my cup of tea... but that's just my opinion. I mean I'm all about a ridiculous premise but there doesn't seem to be many jokes in this comic and the characters are really dependent on the fact they are videogame sprites and not actual characters, I would try maybe giving the characters a little more personality. Also, you should think about how you'll lay out your panels and when to have a close up and basic storytelling, just because it's a sprite comic doesn't mean you can't follow the rules of drawn comics and spice things up a bit.
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The humor is................................
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Not sure, but isn't there already a taco-related sprite comic? I think I remember seeing it featured back when I used to read Bob and George or something...
Also not my cup of tea, I'm not a fan of the humour. |
you found humor?
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not really, no. I hadn't read more than a few, so I was being hopeful.
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I found humor.
... I lied... |
Well you can really Just like it or not,
I wasn't inspired by anything. I have never read Bob and George and I don't intend to, as it's got far to much comics to read through I suppose as I get Older, then the humour will get better, Remember, All of the story is scripted by myself I have given the characters personality though.. I can't understand what you mean... |
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