My own 8 bit comic is done!
 

http://www.geocities.com/iocules/mycomic.JPG
ROFL ROFL ROFL
I find it slightly humorous

lol, pretty funny.

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Huh?

o.O wtf... it just started doing that... hold on... lemme see if I can fix it
Ok... try this: http://www.geocities.com/iocules/comic.html

No offence, but its kind of lame. The jokes, (actually I'm not sure which part was supposed to be the joke, or whether the whole thing was a "its funny because there's no punchline" joke) weren't so great and well... try for your own style. When people try to emulate another too closely... you generally get poor results.

actually... my style fits the 8 bit genre. The 8 bit theater fits so closely with my own sense of humor

Oh. Then you have my comiserations.

...it was ok, though hard to read, and the jokes weren't that good.
White Mage looked out of place there too. She had nothing to do with the comic plot, it seemed.
The text was very small, almost impossible to read at some places.
The sprites were too small as well. WAAAAAAAAAY too small.

Actually, it looks like some/most or this was done in Microsoft Word... 3D Wordart, gives it away.

If so, then good work, considering the software restrictions... Microsoft sucks.

I'm confused about White Mage being there, but other than that... it wasn't that bad. It feels like one of those comics you would read on a take off site, but not total takeoffs. The takeoffs that have some potential, just haven't found them yet.

I think white mage had her hammer stolen from her by BM (thus all the ???).