Alright, I'm reviewing everyone's chars, and you are right that you aren't as far off as I thought. I hadn't been reviewing close enough before, but I am now.

First problem of note... Dante! I said no starting with SMGs in the skills packet! There is a reason they aren't on the Item sheet! No SMG for you!

I will repost as I come across new problems...

REPOST 1: IHMN, you still have no Name, Birthplace, or Background...

I'm looking thouroughly forwards to being needlessly bitter towards NPCs, actually causing them to hate my character. Yes. Well he isn't a talker anyway. He's more of a stealth/combat fella.

I think the others will vote for your guy to stay behind with the translaters after the first time he interacts with some NPCs...

And the last obvious problem is just waited for Celes to post her char. Now it's time to go back over with a fine tooth comb...

And does anyone want me to expand the Item list? In J Man's post he comments on how I only have weapons, so I might go back and add everything from the 1920's section...

That was more than 90 posts since I signed off last night...

Alright, what pointless crap did I miss(and non-pointless, if possible).

Name... Uh... You pick

Birthplace... US?

Background... _____ was born in the US. He went to school and did good in school. Later went to college for psychology, but after getting his degree he enrolled in the police acadamy of some random city. Started as a cop and slowly promoted until he became a police detective. Is used to interigate people and speaks to victims/suspects/random people to get clues and such.

That good enough?

Sure, I'll integrate all that into your bio and your good. How does, "Mike Rotch" work for you? I kid of course, I'll think up something...

WE GET TO VOTE?! YAY! In my last Call game it was all rock paper scissors, I will soon start putting out voting propaganda! Yeah right. Thats a very nice aproach FZ I can only hope that your that nice when it comes to later down the road.

HOLD ON! When I say vote, I mean as a group you will vote in the RP on what to do. I will decide the situations, like what is happening and what your current scenario is, but you guys will decide things like, "Who do we send where? What will we look for? Do we go straight to the scene, or gather evidance first?" etc. Also, I want ot add a system for money, but it seems complex and uneccesary so I guess there won't be a money system... I am doing an analysis on all the chars, so look for that later as well.

It is still better than rock paper scissors all the time FZ. As long as we get to vote for stuff like that its okay. I knew what you were talking about. In the ast RP our characters did Rock Paper Scissors. Which is why our RP was so messed up and we got to big C. Because I always lost Rock Paper Scissors because my guy was blind.

If its not to much trouble I'd like to make a few changes to my character:
1) Change the Sword Cane to the Saber along with the skill
2) Add some demolition explosives (wont be coming along everytime just when i think we might need it)