First one: Hilarious!!!!!!!
Fighter, you got a spider on your crotch! Use this to kill it!!
WHAM!!!!!!
Thank you, BM.

Second one, not so much...

I'm gonna remake the first one so the text is a little bigger so yall can read it, cuz that seems to be the major complaint about it.

Same complaints as before. Stale jokes, and no point. It's ok that you use ff1 sprites, I'm thinking of doing it to. Just use some originality. I have an idea already for a comic, I just need to learn how to sprite. But there absolutely no chucks, no stupid fighter, no stabbity death, and no BM WM love.

Now the love part I think is a bit unfair. The opposites of a black mage and a white mage would be a good love interest, especially considering that WM is the only (EDIT)LEAD female role.

not true... Evil Princess Sarah

But for all we know the WM could be a guy. No one knows. Brian thinks she's a girl, so she's a girl. But the point is that Behemoth should move away from 8-bit steriotypes.

dude... he showed a picture of her in http://www.nuklearpower.com/daily.php?date=010503
so I'm going offa that
if that's a dude... he's hot

And in the strategy guide WM is refered to as "he". And in Orgins WM looks more masculan then feminame. Brain just decided to call WM a women, then found a picture of a girl with red hair in white robes to match the sprite.

O right, I forgot he could change gender to fit his story. I never played 1, so I didn't realize how much was original and how much was rip-offery.

I think I see your problem, but it's only slight. BM's incessant degradation of Fighter is a little redundant. Pull back off of that a little next time. And for some reason, I find the end the funny part. Some of it made me laugh, but a lot of it felt forced.

You're pulling a lot from Brian. Try taking something and making it your own. I don't want to sound crude, but it looks like you tried too hard. Next time, try making it more subtle.