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behemoth 03-29-2004 10:25 PM

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Originally Posted by Bob the Mercenary
I think I see your problem, but it's only slight. BM's incessant degradation of Fighter is a little redundant. Pull back off of that a little next time. And for some reason, I find the end the funny part. Some of it made me laugh, but a lot of it felt forced.

You're pulling a lot from Brian. Try taking something and making it your own. I don't want to sound crude, but it looks like you tried too hard. Next time, try making it more subtle.

LOL Like I said before, it's pretty good for 2 in the morning.

dkhyrosha 03-30-2004 04:49 PM

I like the comics!

:bmage: Dani

AndyBloodredMage 03-30-2004 04:53 PM

the first one was kind of blatant ripoffery. The latter was just not funny.

Ingonyama 04-04-2004 10:22 AM

I liked them...thought Hammerchucks were a neat idea. If Brian had written it, we'd all be fawning. The fandom just hates fan-created work.

Dr DR 04-04-2004 11:28 AM

I disagree. If Brian had written this I'd still be skeptical of the dubious 2 in the morning quality.

behemoth 04-05-2004 08:25 PM

hey! I moved the comics, they're now at http://allenimages.8m.com/Comics/comics.html
I added a couple of new ones too... one 8 bit theater based, one is based on a mud I work on.
enjoy

dkhyrosha 04-09-2004 01:54 PM

cute!!


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