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StormRider 04-01-2004 07:23 PM
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Originally Posted by BMHadoken
Spirit - B, errors, but good stuff most of the time
Was that mine? I think you got our names mixed up, because Spirit hadn't posted one yet.

...would it affect my grade at all if I said I was a freshman? Purely hypothetically, of course.

BMHadoken 04-01-2004 07:29 PM
Uhm, Spirit of Vengeance STORM...and you posted a split up one, and I'm not grading those until they're 'complete'.

StormRider 04-01-2004 07:40 PM
How was it split up? It was in all one post. Unless you're talking about the one about the druid I posted on the other thread, the first one.

BMHadoken 04-01-2004 07:47 PM
So you mean your submission was a failed blacksmith in a bar?

Uhh...B-...

AndyBloodredMage 04-01-2004 07:50 PM
As far as mine is concerned, what specifically should I have done for improvement?

Stover 04-01-2004 07:52 PM
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Originally Posted by BMHadoken
So you mean your submission was a failed blacksmith in a bar?

Uhh...B-...
Whose blacksmith are we talking about here?

BMHadoken 04-01-2004 07:53 PM
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Originally Posted by AndyBloodredMage
As far as mine is concerned, what specifically should I have done for improvement?

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Originally Posted by BMHadoken
And I'd give your thingy a B, If there was more to the story than a crazy guy who envisions himself getting shot different ways, maybe other patients or whatnot, then higher grade. An Ok read though.
Stover: Storm posted a thing about a drunkard in a bar. The Bartender mentioned him (the drunkard) being a good blacksmith back in the day. Not much of a thing, I thought it was a setup.

StormRider 04-01-2004 07:53 PM
Yeah, basically. I was going for a washed up guy in search of purpose, but perhaps I should have gone with something I could have pulled off easier.

Stover 04-01-2004 08:08 PM
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Originally Posted by BMHadoken
Stover: Storm posted a thing about a drunkard in a bar. The Bartender mentioned him (the drunkard) being a good blacksmith back in the day. Not much of a thing, I thought it was a setup.
Good, because I was really hoping I hadn't put something about a bar in my new one and not known about it....

StormRider 04-01-2004 08:12 PM
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Originally Posted by BMHadoken
Storm posted a thing about a drunkard in a bar. Not much of a thing, I thought it was a setup.
It was, essentially. I'll post a better one.


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