Right, never did this. Sorry.

I introduce... The Voices in her head. * Thats us! * A different voice is separated by each and every ~*~. * Yeah, cause a different line would make it soooo long. And that would be very hard to scroll over. * Especially when people are trying to ignore you. * Hey, they aren't trying to ignore it. Remember that in some cases, we're going to be on the top of the page. * That would get annoying. * Like this case for example. * I think I see it now.

... yeah. Anyway, I mentioned them in the post that I signed up with, but they've really never shown up until this point. Oh, and the repeat is due to her hearing them while the convo is going on around her. Its all in her head, so Mogura and Sentinel can't hear them. Which is why there is a separation.

Ok, that all makes sense. Purple is for unnamed, generic voices.

Tried to describe a form of power drain parallell to physical stamina, but seperate, as I'm not seeing the direct stamina-to-mana conversion in technomagic being very common. No doubt Akari's still feeling very sick.

Luckily, Miranda and Ceres know each other. Here's to her insinuating "Hey let's fight later when we can actually have fun" as appealing to Miranda's tendancies.

Miranda's gone home.

And she took her phantom zone with her.

Hope no one sees ya! =D

Oh, and yes, she was the one who was maintaining it, not Alex.

Version 2.0! Cut some things out, reordered to make sense, added in some of the new stuff that'll be appearing in the next scene, and placed here for my convenience.

~ Siphon Branch
• Drain The World — Essentially, naturally she takes in magic to her own body, it gets drawn to her so instead of a magical presence marking how strong she was, there would be a complete and somewhat disturbing void surrounding her. Short version, she eats magic.
° Cone Drain — She focuses the aura into a specific area, draining from that section of her range only but draining a lot faster. An ideal way to gather magic if the majority of it is concentrated in one direction.
° Black Hole — Focuses her whole mind onto the aura rather than letting it be the passive breathing in of magic it usually is. Can be combined with cone drain for immense draining from a distance rivaling the strings themselves, but will only have serious impact once Cone Drain is learned how to be done in a totally passive.
• Siphon String — This is basically the same thing, her absorbing magic into herself, but this time part of her 'barrier jacket' flies off and attaches to a particular source. She very swiftly takes into herself all that she can from the source and supplements herself with it. Can be tied with multiple others to fire a siphon rope of sorts.
° Devour — Pulls the opponent into yourself, attempting to siphon all their magic and life in one fell swoop. Can be used on generally anything, though contact with the chest or a similarly large portion of your surface area is required. Improved on with such things as Red Star and increases in effectiveness the more strings she has. Definitely the fastest siphon or drain, and arguably her most powerful move overall.
° Carapace of Absorption — Her strings absorb magic passively on contact, its part of how they function. She's essentially a magical parasite after all. As such, whenever something contacts her with a magical effect, whether an attack or a buff, depending on how much of her strings are active, some of it is converted directly into energy and magic for her use, aspect preservation depending on the sheer size taken in.

~ Imagination Branch *2
• White Star — Its a white orb shining brightly that she conjures. It floats around her head and body usually. Attunements: Celestial Sphere, Magical Stone
° Infuse — The White Star can absorb magic just like she can. though to a much smaller extent.
° Magic Well — Along with her costume and Mogura, the White Star helps to store magic and life force she attained, incase she wants to split it for some reason, or she somehow has too much and just needs to offset it somewhere.
° Attune — The White Star can adjust itself to become different forms and take on different attributes, depending on what magic it holds inside itself. For example, it absorbs fire and obfuscation magic. It can then change itself to those elements. *This can allow it to instantly change its color to the color of any other star in an instant, gaining its attributes and abilities while retaining some of its own. This makes the white star the most versatile and powerful of them all.*
° Expel — The White Star can blast out magic in rays, waves, just about any sort of way she can think of it to shoot it out. Essentially, its a way of shooting the magic back out.
• Blue Star — Magical glittering tranquility, this star embodies peace and swift but fluid moment. It prefers to stay aloof from Demi, keeping itself a heavy distance away from her, but its massive aura still easily keeping her inside its embrace, slightly tinting the whole zone it affects a deep blue.
° Time Distortion — In this area, Demi and any she deems allies receive a greater awareness, Demi much more so than anyone else, and partly dependent on how close the star is to her. It also affects things she deems to be aggressors in this zone, slowing down their reactions by a healthy deal, and overall providing a great slowdown on them or a minor one depending on how close they are to the star.
° Rejuvenation — Perhaps one of her most adored skills, the aura it gives off also boosts the magical energies of everything in it spare those she doesn't want it to, once again, allies more than neutrals, herself more than allies, and all depending on proximity to the star. Its magical enhancement greatly boosts her own magical stores, and improves the sheer amount she drains from things around her, both of which she desperately needs.
• Red Star — A sphere of pure passion, seeming to have a glow greater than the rest of them. It floats around, normally very close to Demi. It actually a lot of the time is directly in her chest, its semi-imaginary nature making it able to take up the same space at the same time.
° Passionate Fury — When this is inside somebody 'usually, but not exclusively Demi', it empowers them. All their attributes, such as physical speed, strength, stamina, and energy go up tremendously.
° Condense — Alternatively, it can fly into a magical attack, remaining in it and making it slightly smaller, but far more powerful. If it stays in it upon actual contact with the target it releases its own blast of magical might in an explosion and then can be resummoned by Demi.

~ Genesis Branch
• Unreal Friends — Imaginary things she thinks up to keep her company.
° Eyes — Called eyes, though they can be of any sense. Extending her magic out to notice things in other areas basically.
° Critters — Aw... little things are so cute.... except when they aren't. These things are generally small things, protecting or otherwise helping Demi.
° Guardian — Big thing, varying in form due to situation. Its normally big and scary, and aggressive due to not being manifest unless she's in serious danger.
• Voices — The things in her head that talk and spur her on mentally. They can come out and talk to others, but normally don't do so without great reason.

~ Other Branch
• Special — She increases all her stuff by charging her body and mind with magic. Think of it like a star for a mario game, but a lot less of the total invulnerability.
° Sparkle — Her physical capabilities are enhanced, and so is her barrier. Essentially, a buff to most of everything, these buffs are adjustable mid transformation.
° Spatial Mind — When using this, she almost has a hyper awareness, that is, she feels like time is in slow motion all around her, and her thinking becomes a lot clearer.
• Emotional Projection Aura — It projects outwards from her, her emotions that is. Makes her unbearable easy to read normally, but at the same time affects everybody near her. Promotes emotions in others, which Drain The World sucks up after they are felt and let back off, its a symbiotic effect really.

Would it be a problem if I requested one or two minor buffs to my character's moves? I feel a bit intimidated and overwhelmed when comparing my character with others like Relm's example above. ^^; Not too many, as I basically want to ensure my character has fewer moves but each with considerable potency.

Well, I was just reposting mine here because for some reason I can't edit that post, and its much easier for me to access here.

And yeah, I pretty much cut out some things and emphasized a few more.

Hmm, I made the old mistake of letting a few uncertainties bog me down.

Anyway, people are free to move to what they're doing the next day. Remember, there's still a few days until school starts.

As for Mitsuko getting sick from the fight, its an unusual case seeing she pushed herself a little too far.

Anyway, just so people know, I have to get a few of those revisions sorted out with Relm. It's basically that the Blue Star seems odd, some clarification about the drain powers subset and potential power concerns about having multiple stars at once.

On that subject yeah Menarker, I did already say this would be an opportunity for people to make some revisions to their skill sets.

Hmm, maybe I should create a thread to act as a bit of a revised character sheet store to help track annotations and developments.

It's kind of funny how Shimizu isn't treating the magical girl thing as a secret at all. It's like she's never watched a tokukatsu show or a magical girl anime. It's sort of fresh, in a way.

On an unrelated note, a revised character sheet thread would let me fix Tobi's family name. That typo annoys me to no end and there's no way I can fix it.

She hasn't really grasped it yet herself, the weight of her destiny as a magical girl. The zany girl is treating this whole magical girl thing as though it's some kind of part time job or something despite the mortal peril she was in just last night. She'll learn, big time.

Besides, Kiyuri's her best friend and Shimizu's eager to learn how to speak to Ponpon.