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09-21-2009 06:04 PM |
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Originally Posted by MSperoni
(Post 971067)
But I can never get enough of people telling me the art is awesome! :D
I guess you're right. It's to the point where it's one of those things that so long as people aren't pointing out problems, it's doing well.
But if it were my story I would be curious what people thought about how it was paced, if the action was too slow to come, if the characters seemed potentially interesting and why, etc. I guess that will come later once we have more "meat" here.. I have some stories of my own in the works and so I'm always interested in what an audience likes/dislikes for educational purposes :p
Maybe over interested.
Ah well.. anyway, if people wanna talk about crazy stuff that appears then that's fine w/ me ^_^
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Honestly? The only problem that I have with it is that we're given it page by page, rather than in big chunks. The comic feels like it was written to be read in issues, but we're being given it by pages.
Reading through the comics from the beginning to now, the pacing is good, the art is good, but reading as they update, the pacing is slower than molasses (Fun fact: Molasses isn't that slow. It flooded Boston a long time ago and killed some people). I'm not saying that the pacing should be picked up, just that there might be some better method of releasing pages. Rather than having one go up Monday and Friday, two could go up on Wednesday, or Saturday, or something. You could probably figure something out better than I. I'm definately -not- saying to sacrifice longterm overall readability in order to make the pacing better temporarily in the present.
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