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This is my second flash. Due to immense positive criticism I got for the first one, I'm gonna do a sequel to it. And this times theres a story.

http://www.hyperactiveproductions.net/ONE.swf

More animated goodies to come. CnC are welcome.

Criticize me beastly.

The words go by quickly.

it's meant to be watched again. It's suppose to be "random." Some of the text are meant to be ridiculously long for ocmic relief. Plus , they were talking in japanese.

I couldnt really hear anything, so I didn't know they were talking in jap. I think it would be easier if you had a start button that you had to click to start it, and then when it ended it would take you back to said start button screen. Like you said, it's random, but funny.

Its a silent film. The words are not spoken, only implied.

Haha, I like, I like.
Fast is good.


Especially when...:
"Conversation too fast?"
"Yes"
<long paragraph of text up top for split second>


:cool:

Well, if you did all the hand drawn art for the animation it is cool. But the humor to it is a little far out there for the average person I think. Maybe with a little build up to make it seem like a new and well put together piece and then have it turn out to be what we see it would be funnier to me. As it is I see good animation with some flaws and bad timing.

Please do make more though as I can see you have by all means surpassed me in the animation part of using flash.

Here I am giving you suggestions when half my stuff makes less sense to most people then yours.

how long was it, it semed really short to me. but cool.


EDIT i just noticed the word preview. still very good

Cool Animation... Now only if you could read... What program do you use, flash? I think that's a duh. ^.^

Perhaps I should try making a flash movie... watching all the others is inspirational...

I would make flash movies..........but the best thing I can draw is stick figures and my sprite-fu is still being practiced & worked on.......

I didn't understand much of it, but that's probably because I didn't expect the words to go by so fast....great artwork though!