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Yup, it's a minotaur. Or in The Dreadful terms, a "brahman". Also: a preacher :)

Boozloaf might end up being the "white mage" of the group but I'm not 100% sure on that one.

Aurox?

Oh God, we're in Spira! Hide yo' kids! Hide yo' wife! Hide yo' husband! Sin's razin' everybody out there!

Aurox :D

Actually, I knew that, but I couldn't resist making that joke.

Is there a summoned monster thing in FFX named Aurox? I remember there being an Auron in it, but that was a guy, not a monster or a cow. I haven't played FFX in forever and I only played it thru once so I don't remember much about it.

There was a Blitzball team called the Aurochs.
It's the team Wakka played in, and which Tidus joined.

I think that is the first time that Liz has removed her cigarette from her mouth.

Also, do you have any plans in going into why Kit hates Liz? Is it just a personality clash or have they had altercations?

Ohhh.. That one TOTALLY went over my head! :D


Kit and Liz's relationship is one of those things where they work well together, but when they're idle the cracks appear and they start to fall apart. There are a few instances coming up where it should (hopefully) seem more evident. I don't know if they're necessarily enemies, or even rivals. It might be more accurate to describe 'em as a pair of coworkers who just don't get along. :P

Kit also is the kind of person who speaks in occasional hyperbole and gets worked up fast. She's also a big talker. Like if she says "I hate that person" she might not literally hate them. I guess you'll just have to see as the story goes :D

"You heard the mysterious voice in the cave. Wait.. what the shit?"

I literally facepalmed. Good in a Warner Bros cartoon. Bad here.

Also, while I'm being a negative Nelly, you've inherited Brian's bad habit of bastardizing ellipsis. Three dots. Sometimes four if you're feeling like a rebel. Never two.

Didn't realize there was any kinda "dot rule" for ellipsis.


I dunno what to say about the humor, or lack of it (in your opinion). I thought it was funny :P

If you are bothered by the jokes then the next few pages might not be something you'd wanna read.