I know but its not the traditional type

yes.........and Kamifuko, you need to clear out some of the messages on your Private Messenges List, otherwise people can't PM you.

OK, here's one:

Name: Talos
Race: Drow Elf
Age: 244
Weapons: Two-Bladed Sword, Longbow
Description: 6',158 pds., glowing yellow eyes, black skin, pale white hair; thin, lithe, agile, and muscular. A backstabber, this drow cares only for his people and will do almost anything to get money for them.
Element: Shadow
Alignment: Neutral Evil

Bombshell, you misspelled alignment, though I hope to God someone already saw that, and I think your beginning is too vague.

Meanwhile... Ziff was practacing his tactics for battle as some villager told him that there were seven evils and Ziff knew he could prbably kill one of the seven evils. So Ziff raced through some villages until he met one of the evils, but sadly the evil defeated him. For now.

Delmenon sat on a hillside, watching the plains birds fly overhead as he ate a loaf of soft, white bread and some goat cheese.......suddenly, he saw a plume of smoke on the horizon.......and as he leapt to his feet, saw that it came from the village in the nearby valley, the same village where he had gotten his meal. He drew his swords, but stopped in horror as he saw a column of riders in black armor, emblazoned with a laughing red skull.....and no human skull, judging by its long, curving horns....the leader of the band had long horns on his red-streaked helmet, and carried a long, wickedly-pointed trident. Dragged along behind them were the heads of the village's inhabitants, and Delmenon felt rage mingling with a sick feeling in his stomach. He knew that he could not win from here, not now, and not against so many (several hundred).....but he vowed that the lives of the villagers would be avenged, no matter the cost!

Meanwhile... Ziff stared across the land as he gazes at the enemy from a distance and vowed he would never lose a fight again. As Ziff thought he heard cries from seven villages then he thought about what the villager had said there are seven evils. So as he went to each village it was always too late so he had relized what he should so he set of to find anyone who would help him.

Once the riders had left, Delmenon ran toward the village "Earth, speed my strides!" his steps quickened until all that could be seen of his was a blur as he ran toward the blackened, mostly-burned village....there seemed to be no one left, and none of the villagers seemed to have been able to put up much of a fight.....then, he saw movement. turning quickly, he conjured an explosive ball of fire, ready to throw it at.......a woman? Delmenon blinked, she was a barbarian like himself, and seemed to be badly wounded. "Who are you?" he asked. "Who did this?"
"I am Kofika.....or was....I-I fear I haven't much time left......." the woman winced, trying to stem the blood flowing from the deep gash in her side. "Please.......bring me some water......." Delmenon got some from the village well, which thankfully hadn't been poisoned....Kofika drank it eagerly, then continued "Raftaheru has done this....he is one of the Seven Evils, come to plague our land.......and he will not rest until all of this is within his grasp......please, you must stop him! I was not strong enough, and was overcome......but you-you are different........you are one of the Chosen Heroes to stand against the Evils......."
Delmenon was surprised, what was she talking about? "How do you know all this?"
Kofika smiled, obviously dying, yet not even wincing with the pain of her injuries "I was a seer in my village......but even eyes that see the future rarely can spot their own deaths.......the journey ahead of you is long, but be brave, wanderer......." her eyes closed, and with that she was gone......
Delmenon cremated her according to the ancient code of his people, then set off to defeat the one who had caused all of this........

Talos entered the burned village with a satisfied smirk on his face. He surveyed the carnage and searched the area for survivors, only to look up and see a human boy of about 19 running in his direction. He slowly lifted his longbow, nocked an arrow, and aimed it at the boy. "Die, foolish human scum," he muttered, and he fired.

umm BS never said he would let you in because we already got the amount of people we need and were you talking to me cause I wasn't in a burnt village

This is true
on topic: Sylvos enters the village with a thirst for blood of evil. "Hmmmm...".
Then he sees Delmenon in the distance and wispily sprints to question him.