My First Comics!
 

These are the first of a new comic series i am working on. This thread is for questions and comments. Post away!

Here are my comics

Note: i got rid of the "voice bubbles" after episode 2 because they were too much work.

Seen it...

I know you have. i ment everyone else. lol.

oO Or do you?

Hmmm ahhh yes why were they in the Soul Callibar world the answers have finally been revealed

Things will get more comical, i have just been getting the plot explained. Now that things are in motion, the comedy will begin.

Get the comedy going with the story line, at the same time. It can be done. Also you need some character definition. They're all way too logical, and robotic. Get them to do something to define them. A good way to do this would be to see how they react to conflict. Get them in a fight with eachother or with another group.

They all were in a big fight in episode 2. But yes, i do need more character difinition. I was planning to have Heihachi have this saying: "(insert weapon names here) are for cowards!" Link was going to be a little dumber, but i changed my mind.