ok the first time I did this it looked better but here it is

Name: John Lang
Age: 21
Gender:Male
Appearance: blone hair, blue eyes, small build
Equipment: (weapons, items, etc) he can use guns and sword sorta good and better with his hands
Bio: John grew up in a rich family and got all the spoils of it; self defence lessons (he got as far as being phisicly stoic), great education everything. though after his parents died he got nothing in their will. he had to have two jobs to stay in the area in which he had become acustum to: a taxidriver and a liberian.
though being stoic he is rash and short tempered.

Alright. If you want to get into the story have you character have accedentally seen the whole thing with the rambling hurt man, or accedentally walk by Reena's house when the police were there and get captured too. He has to get captured somehow.

And could you change your character around a little so that he's not wealthy enough to live in the nicest sector. (nobody was allowed to be rich)

Oh, and Jess, as a pimpmasta Masta P was supposed to be rich... but now I intend to have him be completely amnesiac from a vicious knock on the head, and permanently stuck in gangsta mode. Is that all right?

he isn't rich every thing that he gets pays for the house
and he sorta gets the rest from his friends
so he isn't rich he he just buys more than he has to spend

Hmmmm I wasn't saying I was literaly dropping out, just meant I probbably wont post for a week so my char is just kind of following the group.

Oh yeah does my guy still have his eye in his head?

Hax- The probably left the eye in his head, and yeah, we'll have your character just follow along.

Dante- that sounds find

Pawn- as long as he isn't living in the nice sector, because if he is, I will have a hard time getting him into the story because people in the nicer sector wouldn't be captured like the people in the lower sector.

Repost: Bombshell. I'm really confused as to what your character is talking about. And they aren't in the hospital anymore.

Ok wait I'm confused now what? 'Cause... damn! Um... yeah I thought it was in the hospital ok gotta be more clear about what's happening 'cause I'm confused.

got my guy in with the fact that he is a taxi driver.

They are in an unknown room that looks like an office with bars on the window. The people who had been in the hospital were knocked out then brought to wherever they are now.

Oh... ok.