When are we getting this show on the road?

Once Demon and Celes get their characters up.

Oooh! Wait for me too! I should have my character up in a bit... Going to be a brood, because I like playing dragons. :P ...Why do the first two to sign up have such low hp?

Name: Kyu Masaki
Race: Brood (Dark)
Race Power: Brood get +30 creation points to pick a gene or two
Class: Warrior
Desc: Medium length Black hair with amber eyes. Wears a dark gray tunic and Black jeans over his armor.
Bio: Kyu didn't know he was a brood. He was found on their doorstep, his parents told him. His first parents anyway. His parents had been in debt and were arrested for attempted theft when he was six. He was sent to an orphanage where he got along fairly well with the other kids. He was adopted several times, but it always ended the same way; he was always sent back after about a year. He'd seen a lot of things, and by the age of fifteen, he was adopted for the last time. Although this permanent adoption was more forced. A small group of brood (although he didn't know it at the time) broke into the orphanage and abducted Kyu in the dead of night, transporting him on a starship. He couldn't tell where, exactly. After they were back at their makeshift base, a rather large, rather empty storage facility, they didn't say a word to Kyu. He sat down, scared, frightened, and wondered what he had ever done to deserve this. Although he did it aloud. One of the brood, with a shaved head and a pair of dull red pants, standing near him laughed. "You hear that? This whelp don't know what he is!" The rest of the company laughed. The brood leaned over to Kyu, putting his hand to the side of his mouth, but talking loud enough so that everyone could hear him. "You, my boy, are the cream of the crop. One of the Ones who Endure. Destined to rule. You follow me?"

"What are you talking about?"

Another laugh from the crowd. This one interrupted by a rather large brood. An expression of concern was on his face, although it almost looked like disgust. "I don't think he knows."

This was met with silence. The members of the group eyed Kyu, like they had just looked at something they didn't quite understand.

The large brood with the strange expression looked Kyu in the eyes.

"Boy? What race are you?" He said slowly, putting particlar emphasis on the word "race".

"H-human." Kyu said, trying his best to look unyielding in his chair.

The large brood's face filled full of disgust. "He doesn't know. I hoped I was wrong, but..." He said as he turned around, crossing his arms. "That's what you get for leaving him to be raised among humans."

A female brood in the corner, who had been silent, shifted off of the wall and said, in a commanding voice:

"I guess that we'll have to teach him what being a brood is all about then."

Kyu was raised for two years by the dark brood. They taught him he was destined to rule, to treat humans and all the other races as though they were dirt. Although he still couldn't forget all those years he was sheltered by what the Dark Brood called "Underlings". He still has a conscience, although he finds it harder to excersize it when other Dark Brood are around.

He is quiet, moves quickly, and tries to be as useful as possible.

Stats

HP:80 (60)
AP:76 (58)
POW:8 (70)
DEF:6 (40)
AGI:8 (70)
INT:8 (70)
COM:7 (27)
WIL:7 (54)
GUT: 2 (80)

Weapon: Longsword (POW 5)
Armor: Energy Dispersal Mail (PD 1 ED 4)
Shield: Titanium Gauntlets (PD 3)
Helmet: Bandana (PD 1)
Accessory 1: Dragon Ring (PD 1 ED 1)
Accessory 2: Studded Leather Belt (PD 2)

Attack Score: (8 + 5 + 4)= 17
Hit Score: (8 + 8)= 16
Physical Defense: (6 + 8)= 14
Energy Defense: (6 [6] + 5)= 11 [11]
Dodge Score: (5 + 8)= 13

Skills:
Sword 8 (36)
Dodging 5 (15)

Spells: Ebonfire (Nonelemental, 175% damage) (20)

Abilities: Focus (raises power when used, Max. X2) (10)

Dragon Form:
Desc: A Black Dragon whelp equal to a human's mass with amber eyes. Claws, Wings, Tail, Fangs, Horns, the works.

HP:160
AP:80
POW: (8 * 120%) 9
DEF: (6 * 130%) 7
AGI: (8 * 110%) 8
INT: 8
COM: 7
WIL: 5
GUTS: 2

(Genes:
Shadow (10) (Dark abilities)
Thorn (5) (Special properties of elemental genes increased)
Trance (10) (Pow and Agi increased by 10%. Does not affect failure)
Defend (5) (20% Extra Defense))

Fixed!

If I did something wrong, please tell me. Thanks!

I don't feel like double checking your math, but if you add up what you said everything cost, your 3 points over the limit (613 points used).

Also, krylo said all Brood live in the stations. Your guy's parents would have been Brood, and have lived a station. He would have always lived with Brood.

You're dragons description is wrong. He's a whelp, not a dragon.

Lastly, don't double post.

Oh dang, sorry but it seems I will be unable to join the RP.

Ryu: IHMN is right about your bio. Space station or no dragon-y goodness.

Also, swords cost 36, not 37 to raise to 8.

Further, even with that, you've still spent 2 more points than you have.

AND, your bio says you're quiet and sneaky. You aren't. You have no stealth skill... meaning that you sound like a herd of elephants... and that's when you're trying to be quiet.

And yah, you ARE a whelp. Not a dragon. Not until those stats get higher, which means your modifiers are lower than you're showing them.

Also: The reason most people have lower hp is so that they can actually do some damage in combat, as well as not dying from the first magical attack that hits them. Well, for you it wouldn't be the FIRST... but a mage could still beat you down pretty easily if they spent some points on good spells or defense.

Fix it all in your next post and you can join, as a good guy. No villain for people I haven't seen RP before. I won't even let IHMN be one unless he gives me a damn good bio for it, drawing on his knowledge of the games and logical conclusions to how things would progress (note: The urkan religion still exists, stuff like that).

We'd also need at least one good guy dragon...

Finally, the bio is complete, unless I screwed up.

Name: Kaelin Raenif
Race: Wyndian
Race Power: Flight
Class: Urkan Priestess
Desc: Kaelin has light, normal brown hair that reaches her sholders. She stands at about 5'8", an average height for a female Wyndian. All in all, she is very average, and is often over-looked by others because of this.
Bio: It's been only a few months since her religion began fighting the brood again. Kaelin used to be biased and hateful against the brood like most of her people, believing that they are hateful, evil creatures, but one day, while fighting them. One of the brood had knocked away Kaelin's weapon, leaving her basically defenceless. She had closed her eyes, preparing for defeat, but the final blow never came. She opened her eyes to see that it had lowered it's weapon.... sparing her life. It was just about to turn and leave her when another Urkan, , came from nowhere and ruthlessly killed it. With this, Kaelin saw that they were the "monsters". So she left her people and got out of the war.

Stats 13

HP: 30
AP: 70
POW: 4
DEF: 8
AGI: 10
INT: 15 +1 +1 = 17
COM: 7
WIL: 9
GUT: 1

Weapon: Urkan Plasma Blade (Pow 25)
Armor: Blessed Robes (ED 5, PD 2)
Shield: Energy Bracelet (ED 2)
Helmet: Silver Tiara (Int +1)
Accessory 1: Holy Medallion (Holy Magic + 10%)
Accessory 2: Crystal Pendant (Int +1)

Attack Score: 28
Hit Score: 16
Physical Defense: 12
Energy Defense: 18/19
Dodge Score: 17

Skills

Plasma Blade: 6
Dodge: 7
Anatomy: 2

Spells

Aura AP: 20 Power: Holy. Attack Score times 2.1
Barrier AP: 2 Power: 11% int to ED
Heal AP: 5 Power: 83% of int healed
Protect AP: 8 Power: 11% int to PD



There, I think that's alright.

Unfortunatly, she would be below average...

No one knows that the Brood really exist. They are only legends now, and used to scare children (Like the boogie man)



Those seem kinda strong... I don't see why robes would protect from physical damage, and I would assume the blessing is supposed to stop energy attacks. Then the bracers are at 5... My guy has the same thing (Just named different) and all I got was a 2.


Edit - Also, I just remembered I need a bio and a desc... I'll eventually do that.

And I won't be an evil dragon, because I'm assuming Ryu will drop out, and you need a good one.

Thanks for correcting my math, description etc. I edited all that. Although you did read into things a bit extensively.

I said Kyu was quiet, not quiet and sneaky. Quiet as in he doesn't talk much. I still think he'd sound like a pack of elephants. You don't conceal a long sword unless you're really freaking tall. It just isn't done.

If you'd read his Bio, Kyu is having some second thoughts about what the Dark Brood are teaching him. He still remembers all the people he met who were perfectly nice and treated him the same as anyone else. He's not a villain, more of a hero under villain control, getting only influence from them.

I also never said it wasn't on a space station. If the layout of a space station designed for habitation wouldn't look like a city of some sort, then I will change his backround.

His parents are brood, but telling you why they left him right now would kind of be a spoiler. Plus, I haven't thought up a reason. :D

editing: Done! and now I won't get killed as badly by magic attacks. If I still suck I'm taking out a guts.

Sorry if I come off as a bit cheeky, but it's been a long day, and more relatives are coming tommorow. Whoopee.