Hope I did this right.

Name: (Coming Soon)
Age: 32
Class: Blade Singer
Race: Half Human-Half Wood Elf
Appearance: (Will finish later)
Bio: (Not yet)

Equipment
Weapon #1: Iron Longsword
Weapon #2/Shield: None
Head: Headband
Body: Studded Leather Armor
Arms: Leather Arm Band
Legs: None
Other #1: Energy Ring (Mana +5)
Other #2: None
Other #3: None
Total weight:

Life: 56 (42) 53 pts.
Mana: 5 (5) 4 pts. (+5 from Energy Ring=10)
Strength: 8 (10) 140 pts.
Defense: 9 (6) 88 pts.
Magic: 4 (4) 20 pts.
Agility: 13 (26) 60 pts.
Speed: 8 (12) 70 pts.
Stamina: 8 (8) 70 pts.
Appearance: 8 (8) 35 pts.
Charisma: 8 (8) 70 pts.
Resistance: 0
Fire 0 (0)
Water 0 (0)
Cold 0 (0)
Lightning 0 (0)
Nature 20 (20)
Dark 0 (0)
Holy 0 (0)
Poison 0 (0)
Curses 0 (0)
Random 0 (0)
Seduction 0 (0)

Skills
Sword- 5 (7) 15 pts.
Single Weapon Blocking- 4 (4) 10 pts.
Animals- 1 (1)
Dodge- 5 (8) 15 pts.

EDIT- Fixed whatever I didn't notice earlier.

EDIT2- Fixed everything else, I think.

h4x-

Life: 30
Mana: 8
Strength: 56
Defense: 36
Magic: 20
Agility 40
Speed: 54
Stamina: 36
Appearnce: 36
Charisma: 20
Resistance: 20

Guns: 15
Explosives: 6
Machines: 10
Aim: 10

Total: 397 (Didn't use 253 points)

Lots of points left... Also, next bio you post, show your math/points used. If you messed up something/I messed up something, then it's easier to see that way.

Also, in the parathesis, have that include the + that the goblin race gets on skills. So guns would be 5 (18)

lazy-

Life: 48 (Used 5 extra points)
Mana: 6
Strength: 140
Defense: 88
Magic: 18 (Used 2 extra points)
Agility: 101.33333333 (Didn't use 41.33333 points)
Speed: 70
Stamina: 70
Appearnce: 70 (Didn't use 35 points)
Charisma: 70
Resistance: 0

Sword: 15
Single Weapon Blocking: 10
Dodge: 15

Total: 721.3333333333 (Used 71.333333 extra points)

You messed up because you did agility as 1/4, but it was 1/3. Appearance was base, not 1/2 as well.

Also, for mana, a ring can add 5.



I haven't checked your class modifiers yet because stats are still wrong a bit, and I don't feel like it.


Edit - I think I should drop Blade Singer's agility to Agility/1.5 instead just doubling agility, and make thief's agility Agility/2...

For the 0 stat thing, make them pay to raise it to one. It eliminates one way for a min/maxxer or 'twink,' as they are more affectionately known, to bend the rules and get a few extra points. After all, the rest of us have to pay for EVERY point, why should they get one or two for free (which they can then build off of after getting more exp).

Also, I can tell you right now, that your races aren't going to balance out quite right. Making something cost half as adds far fewer points than doubling the price of something. 1.5 comes out to better for that. If you pay one fourth for something, you should pay 2.5 times for something else. If you pay 1/3 for something, you should pay about 2 times. It all comes out MUCH closer that way.

That's why I changed that bit after seeing a few characters made in my own (which is what this system basically is).

I think I fixed everything else. I edited it in on my earlier post.

Well, if I add 35 points from your appearance that you didn't change, and what you did change, you are at 643 points. You have 7 points left (Because your life and magic have some extra points in them you said you used, but didn't)


Edit - As for the 0 thing, if you have a stat that ends up 0, you have to change it so it ends up as 1.

I think I did appearance right (2+3=5, 5+4=9, 9+5=14, 14+6=20, 20+7=27, 27+8=35), but you were right about everything else, so I'll just go and fix that stuff up.

Appearance is base. You're only half wood elf, so the 1/2 for appearance goes down to base.

I realized what I did horribly wrong. An error in my mathematical reasoning and a foolish one.
So I threw that out and here are the corrected stats. [Points Used just to be careful]
Goblin Gunner
Life: 30 (30) [40]
Mana: 9 (9) [18]
Strength 6 (6) [84]
Defense: 6 (5) [84]
Magic: 6 (6) [84]
Agility 8 (11) [72]
Speed: 7 (9) [72]
Stamina 6 (5) [84]
Appearance: 2(2) [6]
Charisma 3(3) [24]
Resistance: 0
Water:
Cold
Lightning
Nature
Dark
Holy
Poison: 20(20)
Curses: 20(20)
Random
Seduction -40 (-40)


Skills
Guns: 5+10(goblin bonus)+3(gunner bonus)= 18 [30]
Explosives 3+10(goblin bonus)=13 [12]
Machines: 4+10(goblin bonus)=14 [20]
Aiming: 4+3 (gunner bonus)=7[20]


Sorry for all the confusion but like I said I made a mistake in my mathematical reasoning. Hopefuly now its correct.

Edit: I payed for stats to get up to 1 so you might get a few points missing compared to mine

I'm kind of confused now, because it says this in the attachment:

h4x-

Life: 30 (Used 10 extra points)
Mana: 12 (Used 6 extra points)
Strength: 80 (Used 4 extra points)
Defense: 80 (Used 4 extra points)
Magic: 80 (Used 4 extra points)
Agility: 70 (Used 2 extra points)
Speed: 54 (Used 18 extra points)
Stamina: 80 (Used 4 extra points)
Appearance: 8 (Didn't use 2 points)
Charisma: 20 (Used 4 extra points)
Resistance: 0

Guns: 15 (Used 5 extra points)
Explosives: 6 (Used 6 extra points)
Machines: 10 (Used 10 extra points)
Aim: 10 (Used 10 extra points)


Total: 555 (95 points not used)

All stats start at 1, so you don't have to put points in for it (Besides speed and life, that is what you did on all other stats)

What I said was for some one who doesn't put any points in a stat, and their class would reduce that stat to one, that they have to put points in that stat so their class keeps it at atleast one.



Edit - Damnit, I forgot about that (Lazy)

Edit 2 - You have 7 points left to spend. You used 5 extra points for your Life and 2 for magic for some reason.