Here's the fixed version.

Name: (Coming Soon)
Age: 32
Class: Blade Singer
Race: Half Human-Half Wood Elf
Appearance: (Will finish later)
Bio: (Not yet)

Equipment
Weapon #1: Iron Longsword
Weapon #2/Shield: None
Head: Headband
Body: Studded Leather Armor
Arms: Leather Arm Band
Legs: None
Other #1: Energy Ring (Mana +5)
Other #2: None
Other #3: None
Total weight:

Life: 58 (44) 49 pts.
Mana: 5 (5) 4 pts. (+5 from Energy Ring=10)
Strength: 8 (10) 140 pts.
Defense: 9 (6) 88 pts.
Magic: 4 (4) 18 pts.
Agility: 13 (26) 60 pts.
Speed: 8 (12) 70 pts.
Stamina: 8 (8) 70 pts.
Appearance: 8 (8) 35 pts.
Charisma: 8 (8) 70 pts.
Resistance: 2 (2) 6 pts.
Fire 10 (10)
Water 0 (0)
Cold 0 (0)
Lightning 10 (10)
Nature 20 (20)
Dark 0 (0)
Holy 0 (0)
Poison 0 (0)
Curses 0 (0)
Random 0 (0)
Seduction 0 (0)

Skills
Sword- 5 (7) 15 pts.
Single Weapon Blocking- 4 (4) 10 pts.
Animals- 1 (1)
Dodge- 5 (8) 15 pts.

Ok, I'll put a ! by stats that changed (not the point values you corrected though)

!Life: 31 (31) [31]
Mana: 9 (9) [12]
Strength 6 (6) [80]
Defense: 6 (5) [80]
Magic: 6 (6) [80]
Agility 8 (11) [70]
!Speed: 8 (10) [70]
Stamina 6 (5) [84]
!Appearance: 8(8) [35]
!Charisma 4(4) [18]
Resistance: 0
Water:
Cold
Lightning
Nature
Dark
Holy
Poison: 20(20)
Curses: 20(20)
Random
Seduction -40 (-40)


Skills
Guns: 5+10(goblin bonus)+3(gunner bonus)= 18 [15]
Explosives 3+10(goblin bonus)=13 [6]
Machines: 4+10(goblin bonus)=14 [10]
Aiming: 4+3 (gunner bonus)=7[10]

You have everything right, but for two stats you wrote your points out wrong (Appearance is 70 and Charisma is 36), but you have it all right.

so according to you I had 64 more points revised my charicter looks thusly. Please comment on stat balncing problems if there are any.

Race: Human Class: Thief

Life: 20 (14)

Mana: 3 (3)

Strength: 5 (4)

Defense: 6 (4)

Magic: 1 (1)

Agility: 10 (17)

Speed: 8 (13)

Stamina: 5 (8)

Appearance: 14 (14)

Charisma: 10 (13)

Resistance: 5 (4)

Fire

Water:

Cold: 10

Lightning:

Nature:

Dark: 10

Holy:

Poison: 20

Curses: 10

Random: 10

Seduction: - 20



Skills:

Sword: 7 (7)

Stealth: 7 (10)

Thievery: 7 (11)

Dodging: 5 (6)

Spotting: 5 (7)

Locks: 5 (7)

Athletics: 5 (7)


Also I have a new wireless keyboard that is way more powerful then I thought it was supposed to be. I will now type the word "booyaka" from across my house thruogh closed doors and a wall. booyaka.

Life: 20
Mana: 0
Strength: 40
Defense: 40
Magic: 0
Agility: 108
Speed: 70
Stamina: 28
Appearance: 104
Charisma: 108
Resistance: 28

Sword: 36
Stealth: 28
Thievery: 28
Dodging: 15
Spooting: 15
Locks: 15
Athletics: 15

Total: 698 (48 points over)

Your 48 points over. Also, I got rid of the Appearance bonus for thieves.

Okay. For my second attempt, I will make the Dark Paladin/mage slayer.

Name: Pending
Age: Pending
Appearance: Pending
Bio: Pending

Equipment
Weapon 1: Shortsword
Weapon 2: Shortsword
Head: Long brimmed hat + bandana
Body: Iron Armor
Other: Cape

Life: 50 (60)
Mana: 30 (30)
Strength: 8 (10)
Defense: 6 (7)
Magic: 5 (5)
Agility: 5 (6)
Speed: 6 (6)
Stamina: 6 (6)
Appearance: 9 (9)
Charisma: 6 (6)
Resistance: 10 (15)

Water: 10 (25)
Air: 10 (25)
Cold: 20 (25)
Nature: 0 (10)
Fire: 20 (25)
Lightning: 10 (25)
Dark: 0 (50)
Light: 20 (-50)
Poison: 10 (25)
Curses: 0 (10)
Random: 0 (10)
Seduction: 0 (10)

Skills:
Sword: 6
Double Block: 6
Stealth: 5
Dodging: 4

Spells: Dark Blast

I did not add magic because I don't know how the 1.5x for mage slaying and 1/1.5 for Dark spells work.

How does that look IHMN?

Thanks to the ticker paper on my computer calculator I see I made a mistake on my strength and swords. Corrected via editing along with the apperence bonus gone.

What race are you?

Also, 1.5x for mage slaying spells means take the EXP cost of the spell (Let's say it's 100), then multiply it by 1.5, which is 50. So the spell cost 150 EXP to learn.

1/1.5 means take the spell (Let's say 100 again), and divide that by 1.5, which is 66.666666666666666


Edit - Joe, that's only 20 points you got rid of...

This system is complex but it will be worth it when we finaly get a hang of it.

[My stats are still flawed but I will fix it. Still 28 over.]

Human (sorry)
and Thank you for that...

I take it our EXP starts at 0.