Slow down, your rushing through it. Also, but some more emotion into it, especially into the "Hubba Flubba Wubba Zubba" and the "I think she likes me". You seemed to say those 2 lines in a very monotone voice, and unenthusiastically at that.

Slow down, and put some more emotion and enthusiasm into it and it will turn out very good.






Wow, that was very good. I especially liked what you did with the "hubba flubba wabba zabba *cough* oh! snap out of it you fool..."
Definatley creative.

The only downpart was the "I think she likes me". That was rushed a bit, and didn't really show any emotion. Get that line down and you have this really good. Like I said, wow.

If I changed all that,do you think I might have a chance of getting the part? Do you think I did a good job besides those two things man?

I can't tell for sure. Only a fraction of those submitting entries post here ( I even submitted my own), but I think you have a good voice for BM. Practice the lines a few times and keep posting your new sounds on here, judging from the others who have posted multiple auditions, you're goign to improve. Keep trying, you have the voice, so get the emotion and I'll say you have a solid audition at least.

Hey guys,I added another audition so please let me know what you think of My fourth impression of bm. Thanks
http://www.geocities.com/cosmic_spider2054

Yeah, I guess I'll submit one of my voices for a common vote. Cool to get everyone else's opinion, even if it means diddly in TLF's eyes ;)

http://kellios.crystara.com/bmex.wav

My attempt.

And like...I know I don't have the voice range, and honestly it doesn't really sound like BM to me, but I figured I'd give it a shot anyway. I think I've got the inflections and emotion pretty good...maybe the rest can be vixed via effects. :)

I thought I did so well at mine too =/

cursed geocities...
if you get an error message about my page not being able to be accessed, just type it in your browser address bar
for some reason, geocities thinks i'm breeching my acceptible use terms...i'm guessing since i've posted so much on this forum they think i'm spamming from all of the people connecting from here directly.

I'll try posting a new file within a day or two
on a side note, i haven't heard much about my files 4-6
here's the links:

www.geocities.com/darkt0aster/darkt0aster4.wav
my normal voice

www.geocities.com/darkt0aster/darkt0aster5.wav
kinda old bm sounding

www.geocities.com/darkt0aster/darkt0aster6.wav
like 5, but deeper pitch, more evil

once i get home from school i'll post some reviews and start on a new file

No. 4 is really like no.7, quite good particularly the last line. "I think she likes me" you do it excellently in this one. Not as good as number 8 though- 7/10
No.5 isn't so great, there's quite a lot of interference- 6/10
No.6, you're trying to hard. The effect isn't so great- 5/10
No. 8 is of course classic. Go with this one. Please- 10/10 :D

Of course I need to fix this up. I have a sore throat because of the winter that we're having up here. I can barely talk. I'll try and fix it up so that it works better... but that subbmission is the only one I've got so far.