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Cloud Strife 12-04-2004 04:25 AM

One reality,
Many lie within, living out
Their misguided lives...

Viktor Von Russia 12-04-2004 04:38 AM

One-thirty a.m.
Chatroom is dying real fast
Someone say something

Just after midnight
I need something to munch on.
I'm off to Denny's.

BlackMageGirl! 12-04-2004 05:11 AM

Now it's after four
Four a.m. that is, oh man
Why can't I just sleep?

Cloud Strife 12-04-2004 05:21 AM

Heh, well, BMG!,
That cappuchino isn't
Helping much, silly. ^_^

BlackMageGirl! 12-04-2004 05:43 AM

Bah! You hush there Cloud
I was being facetious
I want to stay up! ^_^

Sithdarth 12-04-2004 05:47 AM

Almost 6 am
Strange how time flows
past and away

can it be
scientific poetry
I wish

Cloud Strife 12-04-2004 06:05 AM

Heh, interesting,
But Sith Darth, it's 5-7-5.
You've got it all wrong. =Þ

BlackMageGirl! 12-04-2004 06:07 AM

*sigh* Another fight
Broke out in the computer
lab. Stupid people.

Sithdarth 12-04-2004 06:08 AM

In five seven five
Haikus nature can be found
Greatness lost to rules

Cloud Strife 12-04-2004 06:11 AM

There you go, Sith Darth!
Now you are learning the ways
Of proper haikus! =Þ

Sithdarth 12-04-2004 06:15 AM

That was in jest
True Haiku needs not regiment
click this pretty link

Cloud Strife 12-04-2004 06:30 AM

That is very true,
But I have fun doing these
As five seven five. ^_^

BlackMageGirl! 12-04-2004 06:36 AM

Mmm, cappucino
This will keep me up all night
Or, until morning.

Sithdarth 12-04-2004 06:36 AM

True 'Tis much fun
However maintain can I
the feel of Haiku

Even if I slip
and at times use 5-7-5
rythm sources vary

Cloud Strife 12-04-2004 06:38 AM

Unconventional,
Without feeling, utter fakes,
Leaving me awake.

Sithdarth 12-04-2004 06:40 AM

ah you mistake
the truth in unconventiality
to tired to see eh?

BlackMageGirl! 12-04-2004 06:41 AM

Something sad to write
On paper I put it down
More angsty drivel.

Sithdarth 12-04-2004 06:42 AM

I call it speed Haiku
I bid come and play to you
far to much fun.

BlackMageGirl! 12-04-2004 06:44 AM

And play I shall sir
The art of making haikus
Is for everyone.

Cloud Strife 12-04-2004 06:45 AM

I think I'm gonna
write a poem, and a few
haikus, then head off. ^^

Sithdarth 12-04-2004 06:46 AM

you have stolen it
my ideal for the gift of haiku
But mad I shant be

BlackMageGirl! 12-04-2004 06:46 AM

What? You're leaving us?
And why must you go so soon?
And leave me behind?

Cloud Strife 12-04-2004 06:47 AM

I am tired, see,
And if I am to study,
I must rest up, yes?

Sithdarth 12-04-2004 06:48 AM

I'll be here
hence to haiku with you
till dawn shine

accross the field I face
My oppenets in this noble haiku
and one must stray

these Haikus wont stop
Flooding from me as if compelled
perhasp I've snapped

Cloud Strife 12-04-2004 06:58 AM

Mayhaps you have, Sith,
I don't think it's a big change,
You have been crazy. ^^

Sithdarth 12-04-2004 07:02 AM

Crazy perhasp
but to what depths can one sink
who's been then gone insane

To answer oneself
Some may define that crazy
I call it genius

I hope for your sake
My peek hast finally been breached
If not fear the fall

now see what you've done
addicting poor me to this noble form
A pox you most deserve

Cloud Strife 12-04-2004 07:18 AM

Now I must depart,
The bed, pillows, calling me,
I drift off to sleep...

*collapses and falls asleep at the comp*

Sithdarth 12-04-2004 07:29 AM

So much easier it is
To express some thoughts thusly
Comunication Perfected

BlackMageGirl! 12-04-2004 07:29 AM

Yay for random things!
Posted a random poem
Tonight random rules!

Sithdarth 12-04-2004 07:33 AM

Randomness and Choas
Pulled screaming for the deepest pit
Or was it just coffee?

Cloud Strife 12-04-2004 07:35 AM

Heh, on second thought,
I just may stay up longer.
Making more haikus. ^^

Sithdarth 12-04-2004 07:37 AM

Haikus from sleep
Strange it is not more than usual
for chaos rules tonight

This knight has seen
Me Haiku more than a man should
and from humble roots

Cloud Strife 12-04-2004 08:36 AM

This thread has gone on
For far too long, everyone.
Time for a new thread! ^_^

BlackMageGirl! 12-04-2004 08:41 AM

Are you sure that the
Mods will allow another
one? It is too much.

Cloud Strife 12-04-2004 08:48 AM

Maybe we should ask
If they would sticky a thread
So we can post more!


Haikus, that is.

BlackMageGirl! 12-04-2004 08:59 AM

Eh, you go ask them
I myself am too tired
It is almost dawn.

Squall Lionheart 12-05-2004 12:47 AM

Ooh, Haikus! What fun!
I shall have some fun with this!
Now, here's a haiku.

Drenching rain pours down,
Canvasing the area
In total darkness.

SuzuranLily 12-05-2004 01:07 AM

Death defying leap
Into the unknown I run
I will not turn back

Cloud Strife 12-05-2004 01:49 AM

Intervene the scene,
Put a stop to all the pain,
Bring him in, end it.

Technocrack 12-05-2004 01:55 AM

Flames raging inside,
Inferno consumes my soul,
Power burns within.

ryuuma2 12-05-2004 02:39 PM

Just like the shadow
I come in and I vanish
You never saw me...

Cloud Strife 12-05-2004 07:49 PM

Now vindicated,
Brought in the light, free of guilt,
The chains are broken.

Lost in Time 12-05-2004 07:57 PM

Is Christmas Ruined?
That is what it looks like now
I hope it works out.

SuzuranLily 12-05-2004 08:04 PM

Mysterious things
Different identities show
Can I find out who...

Cloud Strife 12-05-2004 11:16 PM

What did he do wrong?
Nothing, she says, though he thinks
the friendship is done.

Wasted youth, screwed up
Taken in with pretty things,
Holds onto them tight.

Technocrack 12-06-2004 03:50 AM

Night fades into day.
Insomnia, sleeplessness...
Why can I not sleep?

BlackMageGirl! 12-06-2004 03:51 AM

You and me both man
It seems we cannot sleep now
Why, oh why I ask?

Cloud Strife 12-06-2004 03:53 AM

Make that three of us.
Maybe we're insomniacs?
Nah, that isn't it.

Technocrack 12-06-2004 03:54 AM

Must be the caffeine...
I drank quite a bit tonight.
I can't stop twitching!

BlackMageGirl! 12-06-2004 03:56 AM

I need some caffiene
I can't microwave it though
Roomate is sleeping

Cloud Strife 12-06-2004 03:59 AM

Bloodshot eyes are mine,
Tired to no end, needing sleep,
But I will stay up. ^_^


Why? *shrugs* I dunno.

Technocrack 12-06-2004 04:00 AM

Maybe you just want
To stay up and write haikus!
They're quite addictive...

BlackMageGirl! 12-06-2004 04:01 AM

Maybe they are that
Addictive is what I meant
Yeah, that's what I said

Cloud Strife 12-06-2004 04:05 AM

Well then, Perhaps I
will make more of these haikus,
And then make more! HA! : P

Into living light,
Stripping away my mistakes,
Forgiveness abounds.

Technocrack 12-06-2004 04:07 AM

That you should, Jarod!
Haikus are Gods gift to man!
Very addictive! ^^


Life is a ladder;
I will continue climbing
'Till I reach the top.

BlackMageGirl! 12-06-2004 04:13 AM

You guys are such doofs
Only y'all would act like this
*grumble groan complain*

The flower that blooms
In the winter's white snowbank
How fragile it is

Cloud Strife 12-06-2004 04:16 AM

Drving blindly, dark,
Nothing to prevent me from
Crashing into you.

Technocrack 12-06-2004 04:22 AM

I flash my headlights,
The light cuts through the fog.
You can see clearly.

BlackMageGirl! 12-06-2004 04:29 AM

That's a large semi
Ah! It's heading right this way!
This is so not good...

Cloud Strife 12-06-2004 04:38 AM

Final rest, peaceful,
Dreamless, yet completely full
Of hope; happiness.

Crodevillian Team 12-06-2004 05:08 PM

This topic is closed.
Please do not make another.
We don't want no more.

This haiku has been brought to you by Shiney. This closing has been brought to you by CroTeam.

For an explanation, because you deserve one, and I know the haiku were popular, please continue reading. Past. This. Point. Right... HERE!

While we all love and adore a few haiku here and there, I think we've exhausted our supply for the time being. Especially considering that many of them have been along the lines of:

I had steak tonight
It was very very good
Hooray for good steak

You know... Conversational haiku.

Granted, for all intents and purposes, this is a work of poetry, because it fits the syllable guidelines. However, remove the breaks and what do we have?

I had steak tonight. It was very very good. Hooray for good steak.

What does that look like? That's right... It's spam! Now, now; I'm not accusing anyone of anything, because I know it's not intentional, but you must understand where I'm coming from with this. This isn't the off topic forum; posts get counted here, and these haiku are cranked out at like a million miles an hour. That's fast. Real fast.

Thus, we're going to hold off on them for a while. Thank you all very much, and have a wonderful day. No, for real.


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