The nose seems fairly big.
I have no idea what's wrong with it, but it's big.

Actually, a lot of it could be fixed by more extensive shading. The problem comes in with it being shaded into a round form, rather than being treated more like a modified half-pyramid. The rest could be done by straightening or even slightly inverting the outside line.

Yeah, I noticed after I was done that the nose was way too big. I might have to go back and see if I can fix that. Thanks for the constructive criticism

In other news, I tried the style again:
http://img177.imageshack.us/img177/1048/marieri1.jpg
It's one of my dormmates. The arms took FOREVER to do. I might go back and mess with the colors more... it's a little too pink for me.

Nice! Though the only thing visible for me is the face and the hand. GOD, it almost looks like a pillow! Nice job on the tattoos, it looks sweet! I, personally, like the colour. (i have a flair for reds-pinks) The hand almost looks like a pillow at first, save for the fact the thumb is there heh.

Good job on that Celess! I don't see much room for improvement, though there always is.

CJ, that latest vector pic whips a kangaroo's ass! You might consider altering the background color, just to contrast it up a bit.

Other ass-whipping art of late from QQ and Ari also deserves mention.

Or put in some stylish blocky text expanded to match her contours across the top.

Wow heh thanks for all of the compliments guys ^^;

I tried to mess with the background, but nothing really set right with me. I may try again. Also Demetrius, I'm not sure what you mean about the text and such. I mean, I think I have a basic idea, but any suggestions on what the text should be?

"Not afraid of needles"?

Text looking kind of like spray paint text that you see on walls (the good ones not the junk, real tagger stuff), in the same color scheme as you have done, not too straight and elongated from the highest point on the arm, maybe going behind the arm on the bottom of the letters. Have the text be a single word that describes the feeling of the picture.

A quick sketch for a close friend of mine, I kinda rushed on the eyes..but overall she loved it.

http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a48...aseySketch.jpg