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Forum: Dead threads 11-09-2007, 09:09 AM
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Chapter 4

Chapter 4: Beautiful Disaster

John looked down at the nav computer. The final leg of the journey to Florida was blinking. The iron helicopter soared through the skies, as clouds blew away from the...
Forum: Dead threads 11-09-2007, 09:05 AM
Replies: 11
Views: 1,090
Posted By <my awesome name>
Chapter 3 Continued

The air was warm and sticky, the sun was rising into the sky, and the sku was clear. It was a beautiful day. Swiftly walking, oblivious to the passerby giving her looks, Jessica noticed none of it,...
Forum: Dead threads 11-09-2007, 09:03 AM
Replies: 11
Views: 1,090
Posted By <my awesome name>
Chapter 3 Continued

“Is it just me or is he working us harder?” She breathes out. Shaking his head slowly, Nick responds.

“Pops may not be the nicest guy I’ve ever met, but he has sense. He wouldn’t be doing this if...
Forum: Dead threads 11-09-2007, 09:02 AM
Replies: 11
Views: 1,090
Posted By <my awesome name>
Chapter 3

Chapter 3: The Sun Also Rises

Brian blinked in confusion as the helicopter slowly maneuvered out of the hangar. Rather than listen to either set of advice, he decided to get to work setting up...
Forum: Dead threads 11-02-2007, 04:41 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 1,090
Posted By <my awesome name>
Gracias

Thanks for the advice, I actually went back and noticed the tenses problem, I should have it fixed once I get around to writing more.
Forum: Dead threads 11-01-2007, 08:00 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 1,090
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End of Chapter 2

Outside in the humid July morning air, soldiers drilled, awaiting the rising of the sun. Gray light shone over a formation of ten figures, rising and falling in a series of push-ups. A middle-aged...
Forum: Dead threads 11-01-2007, 08:00 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 1,090
Posted By <my awesome name>
End of Chapter 2

Outside in the humid July morning air, soldiers drilled, awaiting the rising of the sun. Gray light shone over a formation of ten figures, rising and falling in a series of push-ups. A middle-aged...
Forum: Dead threads 11-01-2007, 07:59 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 1,090
Posted By <my awesome name>
Chapter 2 Continued

Chapter 2 Continued

He thought for a moment, as Mark fiddled with the satellite radio. Lifting his gun, Jack softly says:

“Put it down.” Mark did so, keeping his eyes on the barrel, and...
Forum: Dead threads 11-01-2007, 07:58 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 1,090
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Chapter 2

Chapter 2: Silent Night

The setting silver moon shines softly on the bleeding corpses. The light reflects off of the ocean onto Jack’s tired face. Sitting painfully against the hill, he cradled...
Forum: Dead threads 11-01-2007, 07:58 PM
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Views: 1,090
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Chapter 1 Continued

Chapter 1 Continued:

On the barrens of the Florida coastline, a patrol group rides along the oily coastline. Men in red armor stop and stare at the flashing lights and the sound of gunshots. When...
Forum: Dead threads 11-01-2007, 07:57 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 1,090
Posted By <my awesome name>
The Dogs of War (Criticize me-a lot-please.)

Just so y'all know, this is my first attempt at writing an original story.

The following story is an alternate history. In this timeline, the Germans were victorious in WWII. In the final months...
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