Mauve, definitely not too strange for this story. though your devil fruit is abit tricky, you know you can have more control over it then you have. Like left hand bestows good-luck and your right grants bad. Even train it so its not automatic or indirect ways of granting it, duration, ect.
The power is fine for the setting, there are some that are outside the users control, but reading it I got the impression you were trying to balance it. Which isn't nessicary since you automatically get the usual devil fruit weaknesses. So if you want your character to have more control like I suggested before feel free to.
Ok it seems we got a good number of people for the RP. I'll wait till later today to actually start it incase there are any more changes you guys would like or late entries. Let me repeat sign-ups are still open. Even when the RP starts, like the series, I will have no issue adding people mid-voyage. So they will stay open until we reach ten people
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