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Arhra · 08-12-2010, 10:06 AM

I left out some details about your home.

The city you people are living in... has no name. The City's name was stolen by the Abstraction Thief in 1989 and he took the secret of where it was stashed to the grave with him.

This City With No Name is a moderate sized coastal city. Its citizenry lives in a state of mild terror from various cartoonish supervillains. Get to work on fixing that, yo! Pray it is not simply a cover. If there's a feature you really want it to have, say so. It probably has it.

Overcast: DON'T BE AN ASSHOLE. Killing people with little discrimination completely flunks this key requirement! Let us not even get started on the 'try to avoid killing people' requirement.

Plus a guy who can shoot with amazing precision at incredible speed with bullets that are always effective for some reason while doing backflips on a unicycle is ridiculously overpowered.

I find sharpshooters in general are a real headache. They either win instantly or are completely ineffective.

Phoenix: Approved! Of all the justice so far, yours is the punchiest! Might want to slightly tweak the bio though.

Armored Bishoujo: Nothing huge to object to power-wise but I'm a bit wary after last time with your 'totally doesn't eat human hearts' hellhound and the first thing it did when faced with an opponent. Deadly assassins aren't terribly heroic, y'know?

Also, I... I want my recurring villains.

Krogoth: The Cosmic Defender makes me smile. Approved!

Krylo: Copy pasta is deliciously approved. I wish there was a slightly neater way of handling those powers though. To summarise them for everyone else: Shadrach can't be hurt and you can't make him go away.

08-12-2010, 10:06 AM	#10
Arhra Ara ara! Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: Neo Venezia Posts: 5,013	I left out some details about your home. The city you people are living in... has no name. The City's name was stolen by the Abstraction Thief in 1989 and he took the secret of where it was stashed to the grave with him. This City With No Name is a moderate sized coastal city. Its citizenry lives in a state of mild terror from various cartoonish supervillains. Get to work on fixing that, yo! Pray it is not simply a cover. If there's a feature you really want it to have, say so. It probably has it. Overcast: DON'T BE AN ASSHOLE. Killing people with little discrimination completely flunks this key requirement! Let us not even get started on the 'try to avoid killing people' requirement. Plus a guy who can shoot with amazing precision at incredible speed with bullets that are always effective for some reason while doing backflips on a unicycle is ridiculously overpowered. I find sharpshooters in general are a real headache. They either win instantly or are completely ineffective. Phoenix: Approved! Of all the justice so far, yours is the punchiest! Might want to slightly tweak the bio though. Armored Bishoujo: Nothing huge to object to power-wise but I'm a bit wary after last time with your 'totally doesn't eat human hearts' hellhound and the first thing it did when faced with an opponent. Deadly assassins aren't terribly heroic, y'know? Also, I... I want my recurring villains. Krogoth: The Cosmic Defender makes me smile. Approved! Krylo: Copy pasta is deliciously approved. I wish there was a slightly neater way of handling those powers though. To summarise them for everyone else: Shadrach can't be hurt and you can't make him go away. __________________ This post is a good source of Ara ara, ufufu.* *These statements have not been evaluated by the Food and Drug Administration. This post is not intended to diagnose, treat, cure or prevent any disease.