#258
The art in this page continues to improve.
However... the dialogue seems stilted somehow. Forced. I suppose I could see how Charsi is somewhat incoherent, but Sabueso seems to be answering dialogue that was left on the cutting room floor, somewhere.
Charsi: "I didn't want that to happen! You tricked me!"
Sabueso: "Because you knights are softer'n fish turds these days, Miss Parker!"
Kakashi: "Dafuq did I just miss?"
I suppose what I'm saying is that Sabueso's response seems to come from nowhere and lead to nowhere. That could simply be part of his character, though.
Edit: Also, the buildings behind Charsi in panels 5 and 7 seem to have sprung up from nowhere.
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Originally Posted by Meister
e: 5e can only eat dicks if you specifically tell the DM how you do it. If your description does not meet his expectations all dicks stay uneaten. The Fighter may only eat 1d4-1 dicks once per day, the Wizard gets a cantrip.
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Last edited by Hatake Kakashi; 03-11-2014 at 02:52 AM.
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