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Originally Posted by Red Mage Black
(Hope its not too dark for you, Arhra. I spent some time visualizing this character, but it didn't exactly come out as planned.)
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Sorry to say it after all the work I can see you've put in but I'm afraid Errol would be out of place. This is a fantasy land where a menace would tend to be mischievous rather than malevolent. This city is a very, very new thing, perhaps weeks old, plonked down in the middle of a pastoral wilderness. It's more of an imitation of a modern city. As if someone's seen pictures of one but doesn't have the details down. I am certain that power lines are not normally spun by lightning spiders and that the Underworld isn't supposed to be a stop on the train line.
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This post is a good source of Ara ara, ufufu.*
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