First I was amazed by how beautifully you write, then I was angry because RM was bluntly "dead", then was wondering were Thied had gone, then I had to admit you describe combats very well, then the dream ended, everyone was back and alive so I was happy. ^^
Actually, I don't know if your story is finished but the end is simply too cute. ^^
Awwww.
*pats Fighter on the head too*
I'm really glad you depict RM as someone gentle.
((Is he reworking is stats in order to write a book to read it to fighter or did his intention was to describe his character sheet to him until sleep ensues? XD ))
lol, if it's not finished, then I'll be reading!
~kisses!