Thanks for the comments, I greatly appreciate them.
To Skit- Yes, I used to be rather a dramatic writer at first. But eventually, I learned how to be something of an actor by nature and used some form of logic based on human behavior, so I tried my best not to get too dramatic.
To Celebren- Yeah, I purposely made it seem that Thief, for some reason, was not seen throughout Fighter's nightmare. He was mentioned, but not seen. And yes, I didn't like to write that Red Mage had 'died'.
I liked the ending too, because I thought about making it cute. I respect Red Mage, and he's the most -- ahem, balanced in the group, if you know what I mean. He doesn't do violence as Black Mage and Thief do, and doesn't exactly have as many mind defects as Fighter.
...Yeah, he was rearranging his stats in 'story-writing' and 'storytelling'. Buahaha!
To sk3l3t0n- Many thanks. I get really descriptive about things...
And yes, the story is finished. It took me two days to do it all, but yes. It's finished. I may possibly post more fanfictions...on nightmares...or something else...
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