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Originally Posted by Derp
The fight scenes don't look right to me. I'm no artist myself so I can't give detailed criticism, but I'm just not believing the force and motion.
I thought this comic was beautifully executed (and completely awesome) up until this point, so I'm kind of hoping that this is either a.) the artist warming up or b.) a style that will grow on me. I do agree that 28 looks better than 27.
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I kind of liked 29. The details on the blocking, followed by a pretty sweet looking... umm, what's it called.. Kind of like a reverse knife hand, sort of.
Can't think of it. Been too many years since I practiced, I guess.
Looked good, though. And in general, I'm liking the attention to detail.
Any specific analysis of the fight scenes, so we have an idea what you find lacking? Maybe compare it with existing fighting manga like History's Strongest Disciple, or something you'd consider better?
Edit: RIDGE HAND! That's what it looked like Fei used at the end of 29.