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Thanks! I'm glad someone does, at least.
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...I have a lovely legal presentation (on the merits of an arbitration clause) to make bright and early tomorrow morning so I don't think I can guarantee Chapter One tonight, but it is coming soon.
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hm?
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Interested to see how you're going to develop this further, and how the game-elements will play into it. I absolutely love the 2nd to last paragraph, but then, I'm a sucker for tragic endings xP
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Looking forward to the next chapter. Or...The first chapter...Does a prologue count as a chapter?
Whatever. Chapter or not it was good.
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Not bad.
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I am not great at giving compliments, so I'll just quote this and pretend it's one.
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What's going on?
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Yunno, I was kinda off-put by the verbose, game-lacking prologue on first glance, but it's really well written. I feel like now I actually care a little more about what Mirai and Noncon do, and am eager to see how I and others are incorporated.
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Big boss would have been better! Everyone knows the relationship by now!
But uh...less romance and more killin'. Burn, Rape, and Pillage in that order! Supreme Hired Blade/Sellsword/Cutthroat/Mercenary/Whatever Pyros demands it!
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Despite the lag, I have not in fact forgotten about this project, nor do I have any intent on quitting it. This is, in fact, probably going to be comparable to the standard lag time you can anticipate before updates. My schedule this semester is jam-packed Mondays through Thursdays, but I get three days off -- and it's sometime during the three day weekend that I'd actually expect an update. As a result of the hectic law school schedule, however, I hope you'll understand that this storyline will plod along slowly. Hopefully, the quality of the updates will help compensate for the lack of quantity.
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Take your time. this is the internet: there are other ways we can keep ourselves entertained, I'm sure.
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