The Dreadful -- Chapter 3 - Page 2

SaltyKracka · 09-28-2011, 04:29 PM

Two things.

First...What? Lips? In your The Dreadful? What is this I don't even

Second...Y U NO PINK FLOYD?

MSperoni · 09-28-2011, 04:30 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Geminex

Hah. I just got that. "It isn't over till the fat lady sings". You know that phrase?

Well... ever gunfight is a song all itself. And Liz sang last, so to speak.

Ohhh.. hmm.. that's a bit of a stretch, but i guess it works

EDIT: I hope eventually people will get over the "lips" thing... :P I know it's kinda different but I mean... sheesh.. It's just gonna be this way from now on.

SaltyKracka · 09-28-2011, 05:03 PM

Maybe it's just the second panel that gets me.

A Zarkin' Frood · 09-28-2011, 05:39 PM

I remember when I dubbed them porno lips and Matt didn't take kindly to it. Good times.

They don't stand out as much on an actual page with dialogue as they did on the concept art Matt posted. My only real issue is that the shift is sudden, just bam, there. To be fair, how else would anyone expect it to happen? That's right, not at all, so no difference. And we'll get used to it, I'm sure.

MSperoni · 09-28-2011, 05:54 PM

Originally I was going to set up the art-shift with a joke. Kit was going to recover slightly from the lightning-potion and Boozloaf was going to say "You look better. Almost like a whole new person." and Kit was going to say "Yeah, I feel different somehow..."

But I felt that was just a waste of a page, and since the shift happened RIGHT after Erin's death, it could be the start of a new chapter. That seemed like enough of a break to me.

Hatake Kakashi · 09-28-2011, 05:55 PM

Hmm. First negative thing I've ever had to say about the comic. The new art style... not diggin' it.

Granted, it's not my comic, and I'll probably keep watching for a while, but some of the style seems to have lost its charm.

MSperoni · 09-28-2011, 05:57 PM

And here I had this wild idea that the story/characters were decent enough to overcome LIPS.

It's only been a page...

I still am stunned that this would be so problematic for some people. Regardless, I'm not going to go back to the old way because this new way is better. *puts foot down*

Hatake Kakashi · 09-28-2011, 05:59 PM

To be honest, it's less about the lips, more about the horns. To me, Kit looks like she has a massive set of bald spots now. Kinda weird.

MSperoni · 09-28-2011, 06:14 PM

Well, the story is about to pick up so hopefully you'll be able to tolerate the art for just a bit longer. It might pay off.

Hatake Kakashi · 09-28-2011, 06:23 PM

Hmm. We'll see.

Oh, that reminds me. When's HIKYM comin back? >.> [/troll]

09-28-2011, 05:39 PM	#14
A Zarkin' Frood formerly known as Prince. Join Date: Oct 2008 Location: Right here, with you >:) Posts: 2,396	I remember when I dubbed them porno lips and Matt didn't take kindly to it. Good times. They don't stand out as much on an actual page with dialogue as they did on the concept art Matt posted. My only real issue is that the shift is sudden, just bam, there. To be fair, how else would anyone expect it to happen? That's right, not at all, so no difference. And we'll get used to it, I'm sure. __________________ >:( C-:

09-28-2011, 05:54 PM	#15
MSperoni Artist and Writer of Comics Join Date: Aug 2009 Posts: 2,666	Originally I was going to set up the art-shift with a joke. Kit was going to recover slightly from the lightning-potion and Boozloaf was going to say "You look better. Almost like a whole new person." and Kit was going to say "Yeah, I feel different somehow..." But I felt that was just a waste of a page, and since the shift happened RIGHT after Erin's death, it could be the start of a new chapter. That seemed like enough of a break to me. __________________ I do commissions! So Email me if you'd like anything and we'll work out the details! matts_1104@yahoo.com Follow me on Twitter for Dreadful news and random info! (though mostly it's just me babbling about nerd-stuff) http://twitter.com/#!/mSperoni Check out my Deviant Art page if you'd like to see other pictures I've made! http://exmile.deviantart.com/ Follow The Dreadful on Facebook!

09-28-2011, 05:57 PM	#17
MSperoni Artist and Writer of Comics Join Date: Aug 2009 Posts: 2,666	And here I had this wild idea that the story/characters were decent enough to overcome LIPS. It's only been a page... I still am stunned that this would be so problematic for some people. Regardless, I'm not going to go back to the old way because this new way is better. puts foot down __________________ I do commissions! So Email me if you'd like anything and we'll work out the details! matts_1104@yahoo.com Follow me on Twitter for Dreadful news and random info! (though mostly it's just me babbling about nerd-stuff) http://twitter.com/#!/mSperoni Check out my Deviant Art page if you'd like to see other pictures I've made! http://exmile.deviantart.com/ Follow The Dreadful on Facebook! Last edited by MSperoni; 09-28-2011 at 06:01 PM.

09-28-2011, 06:14 PM	#19
MSperoni Artist and Writer of Comics Join Date: Aug 2009 Posts: 2,666	Well, the story is about to pick up so hopefully you'll be able to tolerate the art for just a bit longer. It might pay off. __________________ I do commissions! So Email me if you'd like anything and we'll work out the details! matts_1104@yahoo.com Follow me on Twitter for Dreadful news and random info! (though mostly it's just me babbling about nerd-stuff) http://twitter.com/#!/mSperoni Check out my Deviant Art page if you'd like to see other pictures I've made! http://exmile.deviantart.com/ Follow The Dreadful on Facebook!

09-28-2011, 04:29 PM	#11
SaltyKracka Impossibly White Join Date: Sep 2011 Location: My own little dream world Posts: 135	Two things. First...What? Lips? In your The Dreadful? What is this I don't even Second...Y U NO PINK FLOYD?

09-28-2011, 05:03 PM	#13
SaltyKracka Impossibly White Join Date: Sep 2011 Location: My own little dream world Posts: 135	Maybe it's just the second panel that gets me.