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Goomba
Join Date: Nov 2009
Posts: 4
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The fight scenes don't look right to me. I'm no artist myself so I can't give detailed criticism, but I'm just not believing the force and motion.
I thought this comic was beautifully executed (and completely awesome) up until this point, so I'm kind of hoping that this is either a.) the artist warming up or b.) a style that will grow on me. I do agree that 28 looks better than 27. You mean Fei? I thought he was supposed to be enormous? A smug smirk at some point wouldn't surprise me. I actually thought he had smiled some after he saw Wong use one of his forms, but looking back now it appears that his visage was just substantially less enraged than one would expect, creating the illusion of smilitude. |
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