Pokemon Umbral Theatre 23: How Nostalgic...

[Menarker]

Sent you a PM. Hopefully that'll fix things a bit.

Anyhow, the post was neat. ^^

Only thing I would remark is that Matthias is completely forgotten... again. :3 Like seriously, someone should revive the guy already! (Kirie was also forgotten too but she's an brawler type NPC, so she probably wouldn't have contributed to very much, although she might have had some insight from her interactions with the other Kimonos.) *Shrugs*

Quite an unfortunate characteristic for a PC! Totally like wallpaper, and not exciting one at that! (No offense to your character Dante, but it's just a running gag that has been going on, even outside of canon, like the first sprite comic where you were not listed in the list of guys.)

Also, Honmyrr's currencies are weirdly diverse. Renny being paid in Poke-dollars, Cyril saying that Burkmont wouldn't pay a single Yen for her safety and such. :3 Not that that's bad (and it fit given how the yen is worth less than the dollar and Burkmont wouldn't even pay the tiniest amount) but it was just unusual to note. ^^

I have a theory in the back of my head that the Chroma imprints on the first person that finds it (Elliot in this case) since it would be odd for it to respond to only him from the start, especially if it was around before Elliot was ever born.
Of course, if such an idea is true, it would make me wonder if there are more undiscovered Chroma which could find new imprints (motivation for those who would use them for dark purposes) or if they are all linked together like a hive mind of sort...