PhoenixFlame Presents: Eclipse Phase

[Geminex]

Ok, I'm almost done with my character. One more quick question, does aiming (complex aiming) count as a mental action?

[Overcast]

Alright, reduced everything with a five down to a zero even. I pulled my unarmed down to 50 and took 1000 credits away. Should be valid now.

And Intimidate drops another 10 to make up for the overcharge.

[Geminex]

But you don't move while aiming, do you? I have little experience with firearms, but whenever I did use them, I found that aiming was much more mental than physical. Honestly, I'm only asking because I'm considering whether to get mental speed or not...

Edit: And, in regards to language, the standard cyber implants are equipped with universal translators, I think, so it doesn't matter what language we speak.

[Krylo]

I'm going through Char Sheets and doing maths and making sure they are right, 'cause I figured if I made a mistake anyone can.

Just finished Aero's:

Notable issues--

No skill can be raised to over 80 at creation unless you buy the Expert Trait (which must be bought for each skill you get at over 80). Except for with Morph bonuses. This means that you can't have over 80 interfacing just because infolife gives you +30.

You didn't assign any of your morph bonuses to your stats. It filled them into the sheet for you, but you still need to figure out another +5 to throw into the morph bonus column somewhere.

You need to spend at LEAST 300 CP on knowledge sills. You spent only 170. You also have no native language (which you get 70 points of for free).

You also spent 259 more CP than you have.

And you need a muse. As OC said, they are free.

I also made notes on the sheet, in case I forgot to mention anything.

I'll go through everyone else's as well.

Edit: Once I go through them I'll compile them into a single post for you as well.

[Dracorion]

Krylo, feel free to revise Ellen's sheet, but don't compile it since I'm making some changes.

[Aerozord]

Originally Posted by Krylo

I'm going through Char Sheets and doing maths and making sure they are right, 'cause I figured if I made a mistake anyone can.

Just finished Aero's:

Notable issues--

No skill can be raised to over 80 at creation unless you buy the Expert Trait (which must be bought for each skill you get at over 80). Except for with Morph bonuses. This means that you can't have over 80 interfacing just because infolife gives you +30.

You didn't assign any of your morph bonuses to your stats. It filled them into the sheet for you, but you still need to figure out another +5 to throw into the morph bonus column somewhere.

You need to spend at LEAST 300 CP on knowledge sills. You spent only 170. You also have no native language (which you get 70 points of for free).

You also spent 259 more CP than you have.

And you need a muse. As OC said, they are free.

I also made notes on the sheet, in case I forgot to mention anything.

I'll go through everyone else's as well.

Edit: Once I go through them I'll compile them into a single post for you as well.

ok, looking over your evaluations there are a few things, most probably being my fault but a few I think were missunderstandings. Like, I did add in my +5, it went into COG, which I am expecting is why you had me down for 50CP there. I completely screwed up with aptitudes. so just, yea no CP spent there.

Traits and gear, I thought we were supposed to buy that with money not CP. Also, while it hurts me, you misscalculated, I spent 105 on moxie.

only other thing I gotta ask before I make corrections is, did you factor in the computer skills were half? Thats why I invested so high in programming, research, and infosec

edit, oh and the double cost when over 60, so you start with aptitude modifier?

[Krylo]

Overcast:

Only spent 348 CP on Active Skills, you have to spend at least 400. You also only spent 245 on Knowledge skills and need to spend at least 300.

Your native language (I'm assuming English) is 70 + INT for free. 81 for you. I edited that up to where it should have been.

You didn't add your morph bonus to your skills so I did so for you.

Mental Speed says it doesn't work with any other augmentations that give you extra actions. I'm guessing they mean extra actions per phase, not turn, but it's something you should probably clarify.

Speaking of speed, you have 3 speed as a constant and 4 if you activate kick. You had your speed on the sheet set to 2.

You messed up your math slightly on init giving yourself 4 more than you should have.

Annnnnd you have 213 unused CP 97 of which must be spent on skills.

EDIT: I will wait to do Ellen's until after your revisements so it only has to be looked over/fixed once.

[Dracorion]

Yep, that should be it. Knock yourself out, Krylo.

[Overcast]

Language was leftover from the old one so yeah that flaw is to be fixed.

Skill errors I think aren't working properly, let me check my math.

Knowledge Skills: Acedemic: Weapon Mechanics 60, Art Graffiti 60, Interest: Gambling 60, Lang Cantonese 60 Professsion Tactician 60. 60*5 = 300

Active Skills: Fray 50, Free Run 50, Free Fall 50, Intimidate 40, Kinetics 70, Network Sci 40, Network Fire 50, Perception 50 = 400

Other CP purchases. 5 Specs(25) 100000 Credits(100) Remade(60) Moxie+7(105) 100 Rep(10).

I'll once over the math for everything else but I think there is something missing...

[Krylo]

Originally Posted by Overcast

Language was leftover from the old one so yeah that flaw is to be fixed.

Skill errors I think aren't working properly, let me check my math.

Knowledge Skills: Acedemic: Weapon Mechanics 60, Art Graffiti 60, Interest: Gambling 60, Lang Cantonese 60 Professsion Tactician 60. 60*5 = 300

Active Skills: Fray 50, Free Run 50, Free Fall 50, Intimidate 40, Kinetics 70, Network Sci 40, Network Fire 50, Perception 50 = 400

Other CP purchases. 5 Specs(25) 100000 Credits(100) Remade(60) Moxie+7(105) 100 Rep(10).

I'll once over the math for everything else but I think there is something missing...

On skills: You start purchasing at the level of your aptitude not from 0. I think that's where the problem is. You only spent 34 on Fray/Free Run, for instance, because you have 16 REF, and 34 + 16 = 50

I DID forget the specs, though, and I think the Mesh cost, so that's 85 CP you spent I forgot about.

Gear math needs to be rechecked, I came to 79000 credits. I maybe forgot something, though.