Pokemon Umbral Discussion 19: I Don't Think Nagarai Will Ever Be Named - Page 3

Astral Harmony · 05-13-2010, 02:27 PM

Hey, quick question about the post in general:

Could I get some stage directions regarding the edit? I mean, I'll read what you guys posted again, sure, but a little...y'know...elbow me in the side, "this is exactly what I want you to edit about" would really help. Otherwise I could end up with an edit that you guys would just want me to edit once more.

Dracorion · 05-13-2010, 02:32 PM

Eh, I already said what I think Rayleen should say to Renny.

As for Pierce, aside from Lexhur and Mika answering his questions, obviously I want Pierce to get laid with Shizuka. Of course, you don't have to do this. Just have Shizuka do whatever you think she'd do.

I mean, I'll be dissappointed anyway, but I'll live.

EDIT because Menarker is a silly doodle: Also, Pierce is going to be downing seven or eight bottles of wine. But that's just a FYI to Menarker, and I'll take care of it in my post.

Menarker · 05-13-2010, 03:11 PM

*Deleted my previous post since my computer is going wonky with double posts and is being jerky*

I said accounted for a "possibility". He didn't have any actual evidence or reason to know there was one. There could have been one mass squad or several weaker forces surrounding everywhere.

EDIT: Also, Pierce should only drink 2 or 3 bottles. Renny didn't make THAT much, and it's really strong anyhow. (Plus Renny still need three of the bottles to distribute.) If Pierce really wants wine THAT badly * he might wanna wine and dine Chizuru* have Renny offer Pierce that he'll make more wine if Pierce finds berries in his spare time plus a fee for buying bottles and supporting his future business. Renny IS making a business out of it, similar to the rare candy dream he mentioned to Lola and all that.)

EDIT: To AB for your EDIT

Pierce spent a few posts trying to chat up Shizuka and his attempt to even say thanks to them in his own way which ended up sounding very Pierce like and actually sincere as opposed to his supposed inspirational thing. Would have been nice for Shizuka to have actually responded, whether favorable or not. (Although I can't imagine very many plausible reasons why it would be anything but favorable.)

Renny bedroom conversation thing. At the very start of the quest, there was a huge drivel about leadership, with Harriette (who is currently taking a shower but could arrive and interject in the conversation) and Whitney both contributing their insight on the nature of truly great leaders and Renny asking Rayleen what she saw in him that was so worthwhile or valuable. As much as he is talented, he's not exactly complete and he's still trying to grow and understand his place.
Not to mention that Renny spending the night with sexy ladies in his own bed got to be rather unique and unnerving especially when one of them is someone he developing a real crush on. He's a young guy still learning about himself and the notion is unfamiliar territory to him. (Mind you, the most he would probably do is end up hugging Lola throughout the night.)

Renny the next morning would surely try to give Shannon and Moon a bottle of wine since they were... busy. Also to Shizuka to give to the rest of the Kimonos who couldn't come and to Rayleen to give to Jeanette who couldn't come to the party due to her work.

Pierce also expects Rayleen talking to Renny about the mission (whether he actually screwed up regarding his parents, and whether he would be punished or anything.) Dunno if you plan to do that or if Rayleen thinks that Renny was justified in his situation.

Dracorion · 05-13-2010, 03:45 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Menarker

EDIT: Also, Pierce should only drink 2 or 3 bottles. Renny didn't make THAT much, and it's really strong anyhow. (Plus Renny still need three of the bottles to distribute.) If Pierce really wants wine THAT badly * he might wanna wine and dine Chizuru* have Renny offer Pierce that he'll make more wine if Pierce finds berries in his spare time plus a fee for buying bottles and supporting his future business. Renny IS making a business out of it, similar to the rare candy dream he mentioned to Lola and all that.)

Maybe he sneaks into Dominic's stores (I mean, it's wine. He has to have stores). Not quite as much punch, but it should do nicely for a buzz.

That could lead to a scene of him apologizing to Renny. And perhaps he would make a deal with Renny for more wine.

Bard The 5th LW · 05-13-2010, 03:48 PM

Wait. Are we still at the party? Or is time pulling a sort of double reach around back to the party.

Dracorion · 05-13-2010, 03:48 PM

AB is going to edit the beginning of his post to accomodate our demands back at the party.

But we are all definitely at PATCA headquarters now.

Menarker · 05-13-2010, 04:23 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Dracorion

Maybe he sneaks into Dominic's stores (I mean, it's wine. He has to have stores). Not quite as much punch, but it should do nicely for a buzz.

That could lead to a scene of him apologizing to Renny. And perhaps he would make a deal with Renny for more wine.

Ok, that's plausible.

BTW, Maria would be the one more upset over the loss, as opposed to Dominic. To her, they are special reminders of the past. To him, it's more or less another drink, although he would be upset for his wife's sake too.

Not posting until AB edits his post so I know what has happened. ^^

Dracorion · 05-13-2010, 04:51 PM

Okay, so Pierce may need to apologize personally. I'm thinking he drives on over there the next day.

He'd probably be too ashamed to make the deal with Dominic. And it's specifically the wine that Renny made that he wants, anyway.

Not posting until Geminex stops being sick.

Bard The 5th LW · 05-13-2010, 04:56 PM

KICK THAT COLD'S ASS GEMS! I'M CHEERING YOU ON BRO!

Dracorion · 05-13-2010, 05:04 PM

Addendum: Not posting until Geminex stops being sick, the jerk.

05-13-2010, 02:32 PM	#22
Dracorion Moves Like Jagger, Kupo! Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: To the south, a little to the left... Or to the right. Posts: 4,910	Eh, I already said what I think Rayleen should say to Renny. As for Pierce, aside from Lexhur and Mika answering his questions, obviously I want Pierce to get laid with Shizuka. Of course, you don't have to do this. Just have Shizuka do whatever you think she'd do. I mean, I'll be dissappointed anyway, but I'll live. EDIT because Menarker is a silly doodle: Also, Pierce is going to be downing seven or eight bottles of wine. But that's just a FYI to Menarker, and I'll take care of it in my post. __________________ Dracorion's dumbass color is Royal Blue. If you see that color, you better run the fuck away. Last edited by Dracorion; 05-13-2010 at 05:20 PM.

05-13-2010, 03:11 PM	#23
Menarker OMG! WHAT SHOULD I DO NOW? Join Date: May 2006 Posts: 3,802	Deleted my previous post since my computer is going wonky with double posts and is being jerky I said accounted for a "possibility". He didn't have any actual evidence or reason to know there was one. There could have been one mass squad or several weaker forces surrounding everywhere. EDIT: Also, Pierce should only drink 2 or 3 bottles. Renny didn't make THAT much, and it's really strong anyhow. (Plus Renny still need three of the bottles to distribute.) If Pierce really wants wine THAT badly * he might wanna wine and dine Chizuru* have Renny offer Pierce that he'll make more wine if Pierce finds berries in his spare time plus a fee for buying bottles and supporting his future business. Renny IS making a business out of it, similar to the rare candy dream he mentioned to Lola and all that.) EDIT: To AB for your EDIT Pierce spent a few posts trying to chat up Shizuka and his attempt to even say thanks to them in his own way which ended up sounding very Pierce like and actually sincere as opposed to his supposed inspirational thing. Would have been nice for Shizuka to have actually responded, whether favorable or not. (Although I can't imagine very many plausible reasons why it would be anything but favorable.) Renny bedroom conversation thing. At the very start of the quest, there was a huge drivel about leadership, with Harriette (who is currently taking a shower but could arrive and interject in the conversation) and Whitney both contributing their insight on the nature of truly great leaders and Renny asking Rayleen what she saw in him that was so worthwhile or valuable. As much as he is talented, he's not exactly complete and he's still trying to grow and understand his place. Not to mention that Renny spending the night with sexy ladies in his own bed got to be rather unique and unnerving especially when one of them is someone he developing a real crush on. He's a young guy still learning about himself and the notion is unfamiliar territory to him. (Mind you, the most he would probably do is end up hugging Lola throughout the night.) Renny the next morning would surely try to give Shannon and Moon a bottle of wine since they were... busy. Also to Shizuka to give to the rest of the Kimonos who couldn't come and to Rayleen to give to Jeanette who couldn't come to the party due to her work. Pierce also expects Rayleen talking to Renny about the mission (whether he actually screwed up regarding his parents, and whether he would be punished or anything.) Dunno if you plan to do that or if Rayleen thinks that Renny was justified in his situation. __________________ THE BIO OF RENNY TRESSERHORN THE BIOs OF POKEMON UMBRAL! Last edited by Menarker; 05-13-2010 at 03:38 PM.

05-13-2010, 03:48 PM	#26
Dracorion Moves Like Jagger, Kupo! Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: To the south, a little to the left... Or to the right. Posts: 4,910	AB is going to edit the beginning of his post to accomodate our demands back at the party. But we are all definitely at PATCA headquarters now. __________________ Dracorion's dumbass color is Royal Blue. If you see that color, you better run the fuck away.

05-13-2010, 04:51 PM	#28
Dracorion Moves Like Jagger, Kupo! Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: To the south, a little to the left... Or to the right. Posts: 4,910	Okay, so Pierce may need to apologize personally. I'm thinking he drives on over there the next day. He'd probably be too ashamed to make the deal with Dominic. And it's specifically the wine that Renny made that he wants, anyway. Not posting until Geminex stops being sick. __________________ Dracorion's dumbass color is Royal Blue. If you see that color, you better run the fuck away.

05-13-2010, 05:04 PM	#30
Dracorion Moves Like Jagger, Kupo! Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: To the south, a little to the left... Or to the right. Posts: 4,910	Addendum: Not posting until Geminex stops being sick, the jerk. __________________ Dracorion's dumbass color is Royal Blue. If you see that color, you better run the fuck away.

05-13-2010, 02:27 PM	#21
Astral Harmony Don't Hate Me 'Cause I'm Moe Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: Harmonial Sanctum Posts: 6,798	Hey, quick question about the post in general: Could I get some stage directions regarding the edit? I mean, I'll read what you guys posted again, sure, but a little...y'know...elbow me in the side, "this is exactly what I want you to edit about" would really help. Otherwise I could end up with an edit that you guys would just want me to edit once more.

05-13-2010, 03:48 PM	#25
Bard The 5th LW Feelin' Super! Join Date: May 2009 Posts: 4,191	Wait. Are we still at the party? Or is time pulling a sort of double reach around back to the party.

05-13-2010, 04:56 PM	#29
Bard The 5th LW Feelin' Super! Join Date: May 2009 Posts: 4,191	KICK THAT COLD'S ASS GEMS! I'M CHEERING YOU ON BRO!