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[lazy man]

I feel like I did something wrong, so if I did, just tell me what to correct.


Name: Akodo Dai
Clan: Lion- Akodo
Age: 21
Appearance: A good looking young man. He mostly wears the traditional colors of his clan, both in everyday life and in battle.
Bio: Dai was born into a loving family, living a good life. He trained when he was very young, showing great potential as a warrior. When he went to the Akodo Bushi School, his ability with a sword was good, but his true talent seemed to be in the group of pole arms, a Yari being his favorite weapon. While he can’t train in the art of Yarijutsu in his school, he spends much of his free time practicing. He also delved into the ways of a tactician for a time. Medicine is also an interest him and can be efficient using it. His horsemanship skills are also good and he keeps improving his skills on a horse with every opportunity he can get.

When Dai was 12, his little brother, Shinji, was born. His mother died during the delivery, so looked up to Dai like a second father. This led to Shinji following Dai wherever he went and trying to do everything Dai would. While Dai is great with a Yari, his brother seems to be exceptional with a bow, so his brother’s great skill could be wasted in trying to imitate Dai. Another problem is that his great, great grandfather, Akodo Murai, has taken an interest in him, pestering him often. While it isn’t often enough to concern him, it proves to be annoying enough as it is.

Earth: 2
Stamina: 2
Willpower: 2

Water: 3
Strength: 3
Perception: 3

Fire: 3
Agility: 3
Intelligence: 3

Air: 3
Reflexes: 3
Awareness: 3

Void: 2

Primary Weapon: Fine Quality Yari
Primary Armor: Light Armor
T.N. to be Hit : 20
(Reflexes x 5 + Armor)

Skills: Archery 2
Bard 1
Battle 4
Defense 5
History 1
Kenjutsu 3
Medicine 3
Yarijutsu 5
Horsemanship 2


Technique: The Way of the Lion
The Strength of Purity

School: Akodo Bushi School
Rank: 2


Advantages /Disadvantages: Death Trance -2
Tactician -3
Great Potential -8 (Yarijutsu)
Brash +2
Can’t Lie +3
Haunted +2
Dependant +4 (Akodo Shinji, little brother)
Idealistic +2


Honor: 3.5

Glory: 1

Insight: 156
Experience points:
Wounds (Earth ring (2) x 2)
-0: 4
-1: 4
-2: 4
-3: 4
-4: 4
Down: 4
Out: 4
Dead: 4

Allies and Enemies: (None)
Weapons and Equipment: Katana, Wakizashi, bow, 20 ya, Fine Quality Yari, Naginata, Light Armor, Kimono, Traveling Pack, 5 koku

Gifts, Bestowments and Recognitions: (None yet)

History and Glorious Deeds: (None yet)

[Squishy Cheeks]

Name: Isawa (Shiba) Kenren

Clan: Phoenix

Profession: Ishi-in-training

Bio:

Fire: 3
Agility: 3 (8 CP)
Intelligence: 3 (1 from family)

Air: 2
Reflexes: 2
Awareness: 2

Earth: 2
Stamina: 2
Willpower: 2

Water: 2
Strength: 2
Perception: 2

Void: 5 (1 from school, 2 from Naka Kaeteru Ancestor Advantage)

Primary Weapon: Fine katana

Primary Armor: None

T.N. to be Hit


Skills:

Lore (Void Magic) 3 (2 CP)
Meditation 3 (1 CP)
Shintao 3 (2 CP)
Tea Ceremony 1
Kyujutsu 3 (2 CP)
Defense 1

School: Isawa Ishiken School

Rank 2 - Beru Daome

Known Spells:

BASIC

Sense
Commune
Summon

WATER

The Path to Inner Peace

FIRE

The Fury of Osano-Wo

VOID

Sense Void
Drawing the Void
Void Suppression (traded another spell for this)

Advantages (19) / Disadvantages (9):

Ishiken-do (5)
Ancestor - Naka Kaeteru (14)

Unluck (3)
Insensitive (2)
Phobia - Being Alone (4)

Glory: 4

Honor: 2 + 5 Boxes

Insight: [(Sum of your Rings)x 10 + Sum of your Skills]:

(3+2+2+2+5)x10 + (3+3+3+3+1+1) = 154


Wounds (Earth ring x 2)
-0: 4
-1: 4
-2: 4
-3: 4
-4: 4
Down: 4
Out: 4
Dead: 4

Allies and Enemies:

Weapons and Equipment: Kimono, Travelling Pack, Scroll Satchel, Fine Katana(traded for Wakizashi and 5 koku),5 scrolls, 3 sticks of incense

Gifts, Bestowments and Recognitions: (None yet)

History and Glorious Deeds: (None yet)

(Just for fun, I rolled twice on the Heritage Tables... neither have been factored in.)

8 (Mixed Blessing - Heritage Table 4)
1 (Forbidden Knowledge - Heritage Table 5)
2 (-3 because of Isawa, to -1) (Free Elemental Attunement Advantage - Fire)

1 (Distinguished Past - Heritage Table 2)
1 (Mystic Blood - Gain 3 Insight and purchase ancestor at half CP) (I swear, the dicebot gave me this...)

[MP37a]

If you allow me I'd like to take a shot at it. I've got no real experience with this system so if you don't want to bother with me that's fine. But I'm a quick learner. I probably didn't do this right you can take a look though.

Name: Matsu Sakuma
Clan: Lion Clan
Age: 19
Appearance: Lucio has long black hair that just brushes his shoulders. His dark eyes match shimmering like black coal. He appears large and fierce some when donning his combat armor but otherwise is of a normal build.
Bio: Brash, headstrong, and full of fervor, Luico is a warrior to be reckoned with. Since Lucio was young he has always had a short temper and a limited tolerance for the intolerable. Often he rushes into fights without second thought of who or what he is up against. And though he may come out hurt to great extent; he always returns to finish what he started. He is one of the last survivors of his family. His parents died some years back to disease. Now all that remains is himself and his younger brother Kaito whom is also his greatest friend and ally. Though they have gotten into a few situations and scrimmages they have never made any serious enemies. Lucio is drawn to battle though and often heads to where it can be found.

Earth: 2
Stamina: 2
Willpower:3

Water: 2
Strength:2
Perception:2

Fire: 3
Agility: 3
Intelligence: 2

Air: 2
Reflexes: 4 +1 (school)
Awareness: 2

Void: 2

Primary Weapon: Katana, Bow
Primary Armor: light armor
T.N. to be Hit : 25
(Reflexes x 5 + Armor)

Skills:
Archery 2
Battle 1
History 1
Jiujutsu 1
Kenjutsu 2
Horsemanship 1
Bojutsu 1
Hunting 2
Mountaineering 2
Lore: Ghosts 1

Technique: The Lion's Roar

School: Matsu Bushi
Rank: 1

Advantages /Disadvantages: (advantages cost character points, disadvantages give you character points)

Disadavantages:
Gullible +3
Jealousy +2
Haunted +4
Lost Love +2

Advantages:
Ally – 4
Way of the Land -1
Magic Resistance –2
Benton’s Blessing -3

Honor: 3 + 5 boxes

Glory:1

Insight:
Experience points: 0
Wounds (Earth ring (2) x 2)
-0: 4
-1: 4
-2: 4
-3: 4
-4: 4
Down: 4
Out: 4
Dead: 4

Allies and Enemies: Matsu Kaito (friend, brother and ally)

Weapons and Equipment: 20 Arrows, bow, katana, helm, light armor, kimono, traveling pack, 5 koku

Gifts, Bestowments and Recognitions: None yet

History and Glorious Deeds: None yet

[Squishy Cheeks]

MP37a:
ok here are the problems.

These are the Lion clan families.

Akodo, Ikoma (vassal family Hosokawa), Kitsu (vassal family Ise), Matsu (vassal families Ikeda and Koritome).

Pick one of these names for your family name.

Also family names come first. So it looks like you are Matsu, Ikeda, or Koritome Sakuma

Also rank 1 matsu bushi school is "The Lion's Roar", not "Way of the Unicorn."

and your skills are:

Archery 2, Battle, History, Jiujutsu, Kenjutsu 2, Horsemanship, and another combat skill of your choice.

Also further refrence. It takes the weakness diasadvantage to lower a ring below 2. It's a 5 point disadvantage.

And by my caluculations you have 14 cp left unspent.
___________
Lazyman
You are one character point over. so either pick up a one point disadvantage or lower a skill by one.

Also I may have left it unchanged from the last rp, but the new one the starting glory for non vetrans is 1. Only Celes get's an exception, if she accepts my offer.

[lazy man]

Fixed it. Lowered Medicine by 1 and corrected Glory score.

[MP37a]

Ok updated a few things let me know if anything else is wrong still.

[Squishy Cheeks]

You're charachter is fine. except at a glory 0 you are a peasant. even a ronin is a glory .5. You're a 1.

[IHateMakingNames]

Jad, you really should use Notepad instead of word for attachments. Like those 5 Advantages attachments could be made into one if you saved with Notepad.

[Squishy Cheeks]

I'm a mac user. Text edit sucks for making files for windows users. Word however works great, so I'm stuck.

[Dystopian Rhetoric]

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