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Unread 08-03-2004, 03:05 PM   #601
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I know you didn't ask for it, but drawings look much better when they are on plain paper. Just a tip. But it's good, I'm not very good at drawing women...
I know, I know, but I like keeping all my drawings in a notebook (you now like a scetchbook), and I haven't gotten around to buying one specifically for scetching. i.e. one that has plain paper. Until I stop being so lazy, you'll just have to bear with me.

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Nice work everyone. Another tip is that with women, the hips should be slightly wider than the shoulders (and vice versa with men).
Thanks for the tip, I'll try it next time. Love the fairy, btw.

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Unread 08-03-2004, 03:24 PM   #602
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female novice character from ragnarok lol its one of my good pictures ^^
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Unread 08-03-2004, 04:56 PM   #603
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The armor is very detailed. I don't know about the hairstyle though, but then again, I don't know about Ragnarok online much either. I do like the quote on the side.
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Unread 08-03-2004, 05:02 PM   #604
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Hairstyle is fine. Legs, and a few other things are a little bit wavy, but I like it.

EDIT: Here's one of mine. I was working mainly on shading. How did I do?

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Unread 08-04-2004, 05:01 PM   #605
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I don't think it is That good, could use quite a bit of work. The hand holding the nice sword needs some work,(it's to small) but it can be a very nice drawing. I think it has potential.

Chickens Chick's hair style looks like that of Marche's of Final Fantasy Tactics Advanced, but just a little bit too edgy for it. It could also use some work, especially in the legs and foot department.

If someone considers this Flaming, Fine, I haven't shown up too much here lately anyways, and only Celes gave me feedback on my sketches, So...
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Unread 08-04-2004, 05:11 PM   #606
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Hey, hey, hey. No need to be an ass. If you want some feedback on your sketches, just ask nicely, and someone will. Quite frankly, I thought Celes said all there was to say, which is why I didn't add to it.

And your first two paragraphs were fine. Its the third one that makes it seem like a flame.

I'll work on the hand, any thing else wrong with it?
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Unread 08-04-2004, 05:20 PM   #607
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Fine, I haven't shown up too much here lately anyways, and only Celes gave me feedback on my sketches, So...
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No need to be angry because you didn't get any feedback. Lots of people probably don't get feedback all of the time. (especially on oekaki boards)

Also, MasterofMagic, I think it's very nice. Great shading. The only shading thing I would suggest it maybe a little more defined shadow from the sword. I don't think the hand holding the sword is too small, I think it's the head that needs to be a little smaller (which makes other things seem too small) Typically, sholders are the same length as the height of the head. (from chin to the top of the head.) So remembering that keeps heads in proportion.

Other than that, it's great! Great job with the cape.
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Unread 08-04-2004, 05:38 PM   #608
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I concur, Master of Magic. The size of the head is not in proportion to the rest of the body.

And while the hand is also out of proportion, the sword is very well done.

As for the shading, I can't give any constructive criticism. I have trouble with shading, too. (but that's about to change!)
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Unread 08-05-2004, 01:19 PM   #609
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No need to be angry because you didn't get any feedback. Lots of people probably don't get feedback all of the time. (especially on oekaki boards)

Also, MasterofMagic, I think it's very nice. Great shading. The only shading thing I would suggest it maybe a little more defined shadow from the sword. I don't think the hand holding the sword is too small, I think it's the head that needs to be a little smaller (which makes other things seem too small) Typically, sholders are the same length as the height of the head. (from chin to the top of the head.) So remembering that keeps heads in proportion.

Other than that, it's great! Great job with the cape.
Wow, I never knew that. Is there a site that says which body parts should match, be half the size of, etc.? Or, did you read this in a book, or did you find these things out yourself?

On another note: Currently drawing Naruto, I'll post it up when I'm finished.
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Unread 08-05-2004, 03:06 PM   #610
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New Scetch

I am sorry to have been so mean to the little black mage smilie. I am also sorry about what all I said last time, but I have a new drawing up and all, ready for veiwing and hoping that I can get some feedback.
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