Oh God! He Did It Again! - Page 3

Loyal · 03-29-2004, 01:55 PM

First one: Hilarious!!!!!!!
Fighter, you got a spider on your crotch! Use this to kill it!!
WHAM!!!!!!
Thank you, BM.

Second one, not so much...

behemoth · 03-29-2004, 02:14 PM

I'm gonna remake the first one so the text is a little bigger so yall can read it, cuz that seems to be the major complaint about it.

Stabbitty Death · 03-29-2004, 09:17 PM

Same complaints as before. Stale jokes, and no point. It's ok that you use ff1 sprites, I'm thinking of doing it to. Just use some originality. I have an idea already for a comic, I just need to learn how to sprite. But there absolutely no chucks, no stupid fighter, no stabbity death, and no BM WM love.

AndyBloodredMage · 03-29-2004, 09:24 PM

Now the love part I think is a bit unfair. The opposites of a black mage and a white mage would be a good love interest, especially considering that WM is the only (EDIT)LEAD female role.

behemoth · 03-29-2004, 09:26 PM

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Originally Posted by AndyBloodredMage

Now the love part I think is a bit unfair. The opposites of a black mage and a white mage would be a good love interest, especially considering that WM is the only female role.

not true... Evil Princess Sarah

Stabbitty Death · 03-29-2004, 09:29 PM

But for all we know the WM could be a guy. No one knows. Brian thinks she's a girl, so she's a girl. But the point is that Behemoth should move away from 8-bit steriotypes.

behemoth · 03-29-2004, 09:33 PM

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Originally Posted by Stabbitty_Death

But for all we know the WM could be a guy. No one knows. Brian thinks she's a girl, so she's a girl. But the point is that Behemoth should move away from 8-bit steriotypes.

dude... he showed a picture of her in http://www.nuklearpower.com/daily.php?date=010503
so I'm going offa that
if that's a dude... he's hot

IHateMakingNames · 03-29-2004, 09:35 PM

And in the strategy guide WM is refered to as "he". And in Orgins WM looks more masculan then feminame. Brain just decided to call WM a women, then found a picture of a girl with red hair in white robes to match the sprite.

AndyBloodredMage · 03-29-2004, 09:36 PM

O right, I forgot he could change gender to fit his story. I never played 1, so I didn't realize how much was original and how much was rip-offery.

Bob The Mercenary · 03-29-2004, 10:24 PM

I think I see your problem, but it's only slight. BM's incessant degradation of Fighter is a little redundant. Pull back off of that a little next time. And for some reason, I find the end the funny part. Some of it made me laugh, but a lot of it felt forced.

You're pulling a lot from Brian. Try taking something and making it your own. I don't want to sound crude, but it looks like you tried too hard. Next time, try making it more subtle.

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03-29-2004, 02:14 PM	#22
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03-29-2004, 09:17 PM	#23
Stabbitty Death Oh Yeah!!!! Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: Mommy says I can stay in the basement for as long as I want Posts: 572	Same complaints as before. Stale jokes, and no point. It's ok that you use ff1 sprites, I'm thinking of doing it to. Just use some originality. I have an idea already for a comic, I just need to learn how to sprite. But there absolutely no chucks, no stupid fighter, no stabbity death, and no BM WM love. __________________ Prepare to be dragonballed!! "Sorry, but FF1 roxorz my boxorz... FF8 SUXORZ my ClUCKSORZ". -Courtesy of Highschool Starship, by our very own Nique and Frozen Crono! The answer to any question: "Because the Wal-Mart tells us so!!"

03-29-2004, 09:29 PM	#26
Stabbitty Death Oh Yeah!!!! Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: Mommy says I can stay in the basement for as long as I want Posts: 572	But for all we know the WM could be a guy. No one knows. Brian thinks she's a girl, so she's a girl. But the point is that Behemoth should move away from 8-bit steriotypes. __________________ Prepare to be dragonballed!! "Sorry, but FF1 roxorz my boxorz... FF8 SUXORZ my ClUCKSORZ". -Courtesy of Highschool Starship, by our very own Nique and Frozen Crono! The answer to any question: "Because the Wal-Mart tells us so!!"

03-29-2004, 09:35 PM	#28
IHateMakingNames Awwwwh Join Date: Dec 2003 Posts: 12,119	And in the strategy guide WM is refered to as "he". And in Orgins WM looks more masculan then feminame. Brain just decided to call WM a women, then found a picture of a girl with red hair in white robes to match the sprite.

03-29-2004, 10:24 PM	#30
Bob The Mercenary Bob Dole Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: Bob Dole Posts: 5,606	I think I see your problem, but it's only slight. BM's incessant degradation of Fighter is a little redundant. Pull back off of that a little next time. And for some reason, I find the end the funny part. Some of it made me laugh, but a lot of it felt forced. You're pulling a lot from Brian. Try taking something and making it your own. I don't want to sound crude, but it looks like you tried too hard. Next time, try making it more subtle.