Haiku II - Page 9

Cloud Strife · 11-24-2004, 03:39 AM

A haiku I make,
But it isn't very good.
I could do better.

BlackMageGirl! · 11-24-2004, 03:41 AM

Yes, that is so true
Some haiku's can be so great
But mine is not though

Cloud Strife · 11-24-2004, 03:59 AM

Eyelids are closing,
I cannot keep them open
Time to go to bed.

Melfice · 11-24-2004, 07:02 AM

Goodnight then, Cloud Strife
May beautiful dreams bless you
In your time of rest

Cloud Strife · 11-24-2004, 01:33 PM

The morning light shines,
My eyes flutter; open up,
Good morning to all.

UZ_White · 11-24-2004, 02:20 PM

I wrote a haiku
And now you are hearing it
And now it's over.

BlackMageGirl! · 11-24-2004, 03:56 PM

He thinks hes second
But really, he's in first place
And he knows it too

Technocrack · 11-24-2004, 04:37 PM

I hate torndoes.
They have been here all this week.
I'm going to die!

BlackMageGirl! · 11-24-2004, 04:41 PM

Oh, tornado's huh?
Those really do suck a lot
Hide in the basement!

Death Dealer · 11-24-2004, 04:44 PM

Basements are icky
Full of rats and their feces
Do you like feces?

11-24-2004, 03:39 AM	#81
Cloud Strife Stranger in a strange land. Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Walla Walla, WA. Posts: 2,846	A haiku I make, But it isn't very good. I could do better. __________________ You know, I'd put up something witty and clever right now, but eh. I'm lazy.

11-24-2004, 03:59 AM	#83
Cloud Strife Stranger in a strange land. Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Walla Walla, WA. Posts: 2,846	Eyelids are closing, I cannot keep them open Time to go to bed. __________________ You know, I'd put up something witty and clever right now, but eh. I'm lazy.

11-24-2004, 01:33 PM	#85
Cloud Strife Stranger in a strange land. Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Walla Walla, WA. Posts: 2,846	The morning light shines, My eyes flutter; open up, Good morning to all. __________________ You know, I'd put up something witty and clever right now, but eh. I'm lazy.

11-24-2004, 04:37 PM	#88
Technocrack I'm uncontainable Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: Wherever fate takes me. Posts: 253	I hate torndoes. They have been here all this week. I'm going to die! __________________ Roll, roll me away, Won't you roll me away tonight I too am lost, and I feel double-crossed And I'm sick of what's wrong and what's right. Bob Seger, Roll Me Away

11-24-2004, 04:44 PM	#90
Death Dealer Death Dealer's True Form? Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: Cleft Of Dimension Posts: 624	Basements are icky Full of rats and their feces Do you like feces? __________________ When there was life, there was death, that's where I come in. (From Sloganizer.net) You don't want Death Dealer as your enemy.

11-24-2004, 03:41 AM	#82
BlackMageGirl! Oh hi! :D Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Currently in reality! Posts: 2,688	Yes, that is so true Some haiku's can be so great But mine is not though

11-24-2004, 02:20 PM	#86
UZ_White Lute lute lute... Join Date: Oct 2004 Posts: 123	I wrote a haiku And now you are hearing it And now it's over.

11-24-2004, 03:56 PM	#87
BlackMageGirl! Oh hi! :D Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Currently in reality! Posts: 2,688	He thinks hes second But really, he's in first place And he knows it too

11-24-2004, 04:41 PM	#89
BlackMageGirl! Oh hi! :D Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Currently in reality! Posts: 2,688	Oh, tornado's huh? Those really do suck a lot Hide in the basement!