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MasterOfMagic · 01-15-2005, 02:26 PM

You should! You should definantly make a comic. Cooome ooooon.... I need more things to use up all this free time of mine. More things to allow me to put off the pre-cal homework...

It looks really nice. Only things are that his neck is a little too far forward, and his legs seem just a tad too skinny. Other than that, its really good. Who's he fighting? You can tell me...don't leave me hanging....

Qeeko: Once agian, I still envy you and your fabric fold, thing. And nice to see your feeling better.

CelesJessa · 01-15-2005, 02:30 PM

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Originally Posted by MasterOfMagic

It looks really nice. Only things are that his neck is a little too far forward, and his legs seem just a tad too skinny.

Yeah, I was trying to go for "young link" you know, all lanky and such, but yeah, his legs are too skinny and his neck is wrong.

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Other than that, its really good. Who's he fighting? You can tell me...don't leave me hanging....

Well, in my mind, he's fighting the skeletons that come out of the ground in Hyrule feild when it turns night time (supposedly he's fighting them for the first time, but he has the master sword so... I guess not.)

MasterOfMagic · 01-15-2005, 02:35 PM

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Well, in my mind, he's fighting the skeletons that come out of the ground in Hyrule feild when it turns night time (supposedly he's fighting them for the first time, but he has the master sword so... I guess not.)

Ah, a wizard did it. Always liked fighting those skeletons.

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Yeah, I was trying to go for "young link" you know, all lanky and such, but yeah, his legs are too skinny

Oh, yeah, you've got the young thing down, that was the first thing I noticed when I saw the pic. The legs just need to be a little bit thicker, not much really, just....a tad. Yeah.

Arlia Janet · 01-15-2005, 06:59 PM

Celes, that is an awesome comic attempt. I think you should try out the webcomic scene if you have the time. I think you will distinguish yourself.

Anyways, this drawing is supposed to look like the attached sprite. It's still in its beta form, but I would love to hear suggestions for the hair and anything else that is wrong with it.

<- This is supposed to be the sprite. The scars are intentional.

The sprite->

VA_Ninja · 01-15-2005, 07:09 PM

CJ: very good comic. Keep at it.

AJ: It does look a lot like him. Maybe make the hair stick out the back more.

QueenQeeko · 01-15-2005, 07:48 PM

Thanks, MoM. Always glad to like my work

CJ: Very nice. I like the eye in the corner of the page

AJ: Very, good indeed. I agree with VA_Ninja and the hair needs to be filled out at the back more. Otherwise, nice work.

Also, just a tip, try adding a little white to the innder side of the eyeballs, the character looks a little cross eyed right now...

Cloud Strife · 01-15-2005, 08:40 PM

Gm_Skweeb: I like it a lot, especially the shading job.

Qeeko: As usual, I'm in awe of your skills as an artist. Both the sketch and the poem are beautiful.

CJ: Ooo, Link! I like!

AJ: That's good stuff! I like it.

Grandmaster_Skweeb · 01-16-2005, 12:56 AM

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Originally Posted by Funka Genocide

is it a monk, or a hand to hand fighter?

whatever it is, its really freakin' sweet!

He's a fighter who specializes in dual wielding katars (punch daggers). i drew him and when i was finished i realized he didn't have his weapons anywhere on him...and it was too late to add them in.

Arlia Janet · 01-16-2005, 02:45 PM

I have updated the drawings in my last two posts a la QQ's sugestion to move the eyes. For the drawing of the knight, I'm not sure what you mean by adding more hair to the back unless you want the guy to look like frigging Vegeta. How do I add hair to the back without it looking like it is standing straight up?
Here they are-
One.
Two.

VA_Ninja · 01-16-2005, 02:50 PM

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Originally Posted by Arlia Janet

I have updated the drawings in my last two posts a la QQ's sugestion to move the eyes. For the drawing of the knight, I'm not sure what you mean by adding more hair to the back unless you want the guy to look like frigging Vegeta. How do I add hair to the back without it looking like it is standing straight up?
Here they are-
One.
Two.

What we mean by the hair is from the looks of the sprite, the hair is long in the back, or possibly in a ponytail(just a hunch). Maybe make it look like a mullet?

01-15-2005, 06:59 PM	#1364
Arlia Janet Worrying Myself Gray Join Date: May 2004 Location: Valley of Sunflowers Posts: 1,102	Celes, that is an awesome comic attempt. I think you should try out the webcomic scene if you have the time. I think you will distinguish yourself. Anyways, this drawing is supposed to look like the attached sprite. It's still in its beta form, but I would love to hear suggestions for the hair and anything else that is wrong with it. <- This is supposed to be the sprite. The scars are intentional. The sprite-> __________________ Fortuna Saga (Complete) Hymns of the Apostate (Complete) My Guest Comics: In A World... Corneria's Kick Ass Newspaper Last edited by Arlia Janet; 01-15-2005 at 07:19 PM.

01-15-2005, 07:48 PM	#1366
QueenQeeko Sent to the cornfield Join Date: May 2004 Posts: 1,099	Nice Thanks, MoM. Always glad to like my work CJ: Very nice. I like the eye in the corner of the page AJ: Very, good indeed. I agree with VA_Ninja and the hair needs to be filled out at the back more. Otherwise, nice work. Also, just a tip, try adding a little white to the innder side of the eyeballs, the character looks a little cross eyed right now... Last edited by QueenQeeko; 01-15-2005 at 07:51 PM.

01-15-2005, 08:40 PM	#1367
Cloud Strife Stranger in a strange land. Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Walla Walla, WA. Posts: 2,846	Gm_Skweeb: I like it a lot, especially the shading job. Qeeko: As usual, I'm in awe of your skills as an artist. Both the sketch and the poem are beautiful. CJ: Ooo, Link! I like! AJ: That's good stuff! I like it. __________________ You know, I'd put up something witty and clever right now, but eh. I'm lazy.

01-16-2005, 02:45 PM	#1369
Arlia Janet Worrying Myself Gray Join Date: May 2004 Location: Valley of Sunflowers Posts: 1,102	I have updated the drawings in my last two posts a la QQ's sugestion to move the eyes. For the drawing of the knight, I'm not sure what you mean by adding more hair to the back unless you want the guy to look like frigging Vegeta. How do I add hair to the back without it looking like it is standing straight up? Here they are- One. Two. __________________ Fortuna Saga (Complete) Hymns of the Apostate (Complete) My Guest Comics: In A World... Corneria's Kick Ass Newspaper

01-15-2005, 02:26 PM	#1361
MasterOfMagic ahahah Join Date: Mar 2004 Posts: 3,456	You should! You should definantly make a comic. Cooome ooooon.... I need more things to use up all this free time of mine. More things to allow me to put off the pre-cal homework... It looks really nice. Only things are that his neck is a little too far forward, and his legs seem just a tad too skinny. Other than that, its really good. Who's he fighting? You can tell me...don't leave me hanging.... Qeeko: Once agian, I still envy you and your fabric fold, thing. And nice to see your feeling better.

01-15-2005, 07:09 PM	#1365
VA_Ninja :3 Join Date: Oct 2004 Posts: 395	CJ: very good comic. Keep at it. AJ: It does look a lot like him. Maybe make the hair stick out the back more.