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Melfice · 03-23-2004, 07:22 AM

It looks good Daer-San, though the face is a bit too much. DBZ-eyes and a very small face, plus the facial lines. It's too much in this picture. Either you should have made the eyes smaller, or the face wider and without the facial lines. Anyway, I like the folding and shading in his clothes. Keep it up, and work on the face if you will.

03-23-2004, 07:40 AM

apart from Melfice's suggestions all I can add is that the left foot (right depending on which way you look at it) looks a little wierd. apart from that its a good drawing.

SNAFU · 03-23-2004, 06:06 PM

My sister made this one, I just colored it in for her. This is a character from Ghost Who Walk's comics. Some of the clarity was lost because I had to change it to a JPEG so that it would allow me to upload it. By the way, I am looking for someone who can draw anime-like characters for a titlepage. Private message me if you are interested. Three to four characters.

Melfice · 03-24-2004, 01:48 AM

Complement your sis. It looks good, but is it copied or a made up character? As I said I like it.

03-24-2004, 02:00 AM

As the Melfice said, nice job to you and your sister Acolyte. My only suggestion is that you lighten the colours a bit and add some shading.

SNAFU · 03-24-2004, 02:23 AM

I'm pretty sure that the character is from somewhere, but my Japanimation IQ is limited to Cowboy Bebop and Trigun. Wherever she is from, she looks just like a character from a sprite comic made by a friend.

CelesJessa · 03-25-2004, 03:51 PM

wOOt, I've been so obsessed with the Legend of Zelda lately... so I draw a quick Oekaki of Sheik... She ended up not looking as kick-arse as I was hoping...

My favorite part is the background. ^^ The swirly thing happened by accedent at first, but I liked it, so I kept doing it.

03-26-2004, 12:48 AM

Despite all of your concerns its still a good pic. BTW I can understand the obsession. I've finished Ocarina of Time four times over. *sniff* so many memories.

Melfice · 03-26-2004, 05:33 AM

I havn't played Zelda ever, so I can't understand your obsession... However I like the Oekaki. She looks real sad, I like that. And the background looks real good. No real criticsism(sp?) really. Oh, yes I do have one... It looks like she's missing hair on the back of her head, though that might be part of the character, wearing a turban and all.

Looks nice!

dragonglove · 03-26-2004, 11:21 AM

Actually that brings me to my critisism. I think the turban is a little large. I think it's supposed to be flatter and not come out so much. Granted I am going off only my memory and a picture in the SSBM book.

03-23-2004, 06:06 PM	#353
SNAFU This is my happy face. Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: Sorry Ladies... I'm Engaged. Posts: 431	My sister made this one, I just colored it in for her. This is a character from Ghost Who Walk's comics. Some of the clarity was lost because I had to change it to a JPEG so that it would allow me to upload it. By the way, I am looking for someone who can draw anime-like characters for a titlepage. Private message me if you are interested. Three to four characters. Attached Images __________________ The Fortuna Saga

03-24-2004, 02:23 AM	#356
SNAFU This is my happy face. Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: Sorry Ladies... I'm Engaged. Posts: 431	I'm pretty sure that the character is from somewhere, but my Japanimation IQ is limited to Cowboy Bebop and Trigun. Wherever she is from, she looks just like a character from a sprite comic made by a friend. __________________ The Fortuna Saga

03-25-2004, 03:51 PM	#357
CelesJessa DA-DA-DA-DAA DAA DAA DA DA-DAAAAAA! Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: Zanzibar Land Posts: 6,531	wOOt, I've been so obsessed with the Legend of Zelda lately... so I draw a quick Oekaki of Sheik... She ended up not looking as kick-arse as I was hoping... My favorite part is the background. ^^ The swirly thing happened by accedent at first, but I liked it, so I kept doing it. Attached Images __________________

03-26-2004, 11:21 AM	#360
dragonglove Knight of El Dingo Join Date: Dec 2003 Posts: 642	Actually that brings me to my critisism. I think the turban is a little large. I think it's supposed to be flatter and not come out so much. Granted I am going off only my memory and a picture in the SSBM book. __________________ Dg's back, maybe. I swear "Forum Days" will return someday. War is no reason to end a friendship. Metal Gear Solid

03-23-2004, 07:40 AM	#352
Tenjin Matsukaru Guest Posts: n/a	apart from Melfice's suggestions all I can add is that the left foot (right depending on which way you look at it) looks a little wierd. apart from that its a good drawing.

03-24-2004, 02:00 AM	#355
Tenjin Matsukaru Guest Posts: n/a	As the Melfice said, nice job to you and your sister Acolyte. My only suggestion is that you lighten the colours a bit and add some shading.

03-26-2004, 12:48 AM	#358
Tenjin Matsukaru Guest Posts: n/a	Despite all of your concerns its still a good pic. BTW I can understand the obsession. I've finished Ocarina of Time four times over. sniff so many memories.