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Unread 01-07-2011, 02:09 PM   #4
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Originally Posted by Cerulean View Post
By the way, since I have you here, and you're the first poster in my thread, would you mind giving me your take on my comic, thus far? I'm interested in what people think; it's my first comic, so yeah, I kinda need feedback.
Well, it looks pretty enough for a sprite comic. My only real issue is how the two characters met, Long-hair guy said "You work for me now," and Kaen just went with it.

And then kept going with it.

It's just a bit odd. People don't tend to take jobs from fleeing men, even if their occupation is body guard. He must really be into his work, I guess.
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