Tears of the Scions

[phil_]

Originally Posted by Cerulean

By the way, since I have you here, and you're the first poster in my thread, would you mind giving me your take on my comic, thus far? I'm interested in what people think; it's my first comic, so yeah, I kinda need feedback.

Well, it looks pretty enough for a sprite comic. My only real issue is how the two characters met, Long-hair guy said "You work for me now," and Kaen just went with it.

And then kept going with it.

It's just a bit odd. People don't tend to take jobs from fleeing men, even if their occupation is body guard. He must really be into his work, I guess.

[Cerulean]

Originally Posted by phil_

Well, it looks pretty enough for a sprite comic. My only real issue is how the two characters met, Long-hair guy said "You work for me now," and Kaen just went with it.

And then kept going with it.

It's just a bit odd. People don't tend to take jobs from fleeing men, even if their occupation is body guard. He must really be into his work, I guess.

Thanks for the comment. And I agree with you! It's pretty silly of Kaen to have kept going. Part of it is the madness of the situation (the "train" moves so fast that by the time you wanna jump off it's too late). Another part of it is Kaen's motives/personality, which will be explained in due time

I hope that clears that up and doesn't sound like a lame excuse to save my ass